All Comments on 'Two Jerks Pull Con to Fuck How Wife'

An original plot! Quite well written. I have the same problem with the titles. You past or attach the story,but you have to type in the title. Fuck How Wife?

It was OK as written, but it might have been better ir the wife and husband were fleshed out a bit more, to give us some idea of how they interacted with each other.

Very novel idea and well portraide giving a very horny description. liked it a lot.

Old folks are not sexy so I rated it 1*.

Dwornock posted:

"Linda and I are in our early forties.

Old folks are not sexy so I rated it 1*."

I sure hope when you reach your early forties my friend and you will that some cheap teeny booper looks at you and say "ew gross". Your views by then would have changed but your words today will follow you. Think before you write something.

Just from your many post you do I see you enjoy degrading your fellow human beings.

And another thing did you know that halve the actors that play high school parts are over the age of twenty. They are just baby faced.

Dont get me wrong I like the sweet young things myself but I would not turn down Angelina Jolie, Meg Ryan, or Drew Barrymore like you just did.

Now after the rant is over.....

I like this story but I would have killed Tom first off and then came after Carlos. I would even try to protect both Tina and Linda from the jerk squad. After all Tom and Carlos is technically quilty of raping Linda.

I like to read a follow up on how all these issues were resolved.

Thanks,

John

I found the plot of this story very good, but I think the actual writing could have used a lot of improvement. First, it's written along the lines of how someone would tell his buddy what happened. I did this... I did that... It would have been much better if it were written as an actual story with dialog and different persepctives.

Stormbringer

Sexy isn't an age. The only thing you are showing is your own ignorance and youth. And that comment is so infantile that I don't think you are old enough to be on this site.

Your revenge is still missing.

Don't leave us hanging. Prod your Muse for a coda!

I think there was more than two jerks involved!

This story was written over six years ago, and the last appearance by this author was over 5 years ago. I would say, this story is fair game for someone who wants to write a revenge sequel.

Would.have been nice to see what his revenge would have been.

I think that in a future story it will come out that she knew and wants to do it again.

Good story, but again I hate when the truth is kept from the spouses. The husband does realize that his wife was raped doesn't he. Dumb fuck.