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Late Night Pleasure

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/12/12

try to not start every sentence with 'he' next time.

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by DWornock02/12/12

After deducting 2 stars for the wrong catagory which should be "Loving wives"

I rated it 3 stars.

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by Anonymous02/12/12

Liked it, very simple, although some repetition of words e.g. 'lip/lips' in consecutive sentences, which made it mildly irritating.

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by Anonymous02/14/12

Dworncock

You are an idiot, you can't even spell category correctly.

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