Male Attacked by Tentacles

Needs editing, but good story

If you don't already, get someone to help you out with editing, lots of grammer mistakes and oddly written sentences. Even the best writers will miss mistakes while self editing since your mind knows what it wants to say. That said, nice story, I'd definitly read more if you keep writing.

This was awesome.

The previous commenter was right as far as grammar goes but over all I found it very entertaining and interesting, this being the first story I've read about tentacles but now I can definetely see why so many of my friends fantasize or have a "thing" for them. Thank you very much for sharing your stroy and I found the detail in this amazing and think you have an absolutely brilliant and creative mind.

I am not gay, but...

This story had me hard as a rock! Don't know what it tapped into, but great job in writing something so unusual and so erotic. Yes, could use a better editing job, true, but the raw imagery was wonderful.

Stimulating

Needs some grammar clean up but excellent, and very stimulating story.

Nice

Nice erotic horror story. Tentacle story have always intrigued me.

A Ball-churner ...*

Thoroughly sexy and captivating, thank you.

new fav word: 'dangersome'
seriously its awsome. the story and the word. hard to describe more, lol sry if this isnt helpful...

Nothing short of...

FUCKING HOT! I'd love to be "tentacled" by a creature...

I came so hard

This story was perfect, i would love to have this happen to me. Your grammar was a bit weird, but the sexy topic more than made up for it.

Spectator

matches the discription perfectly don't know about the slime but it worked if u keep writing this could be a story and i personaly want to read it

Amazing

This is really good, and I want someone to animate it and link it. It would be the best thing ever.

Would have been amazing if the grammer was correct >.>

It's HARD to write a story

Typing when you are probably naked, stroking, moaning and thinking is a difficult combo. But text aside, would love to be tentacled too either by myself or with him, even better in a sucking quicksand.

Wow

That was hot! I loved it a lot. :)

Gay rape

I totally love this, it's really hot and detailed. I'd love to hear more stories about the tentacle rape on guys more on, add hot male demons too it as well. Make it pop! If you guys wanna kik me my kik is Killerfrostwing2 if you guys wish to role play it.

Some smexy shit

This had me reaching for ice it was so hot