All Comments on 'Male Attacked by Tentacles'

If you don't already, get someone to help you out with editing, lots of grammer mistakes and oddly written sentences. Even the best writers will miss mistakes while self editing since your mind knows what it wants to say. That said, nice story, I'd definitly read more if you keep writing.

The previous commenter was right as far as grammar goes but over all I found it very entertaining and interesting, this being the first story I've read about tentacles but now I can definetely see why so many of my friends fantasize or have a "thing" for them. Thank you very much for sharing your stroy and I found the detail in this amazing and think you have an absolutely brilliant and creative mind.

This story had me hard as a rock! Don't know what it tapped into, but great job in writing something so unusual and so erotic. Yes, could use a better editing job, true, but the raw imagery was wonderful.

Needs some grammar clean up but excellent, and very stimulating story.

Nice erotic horror story. Tentacle story have always intrigued me.

Thoroughly sexy and captivating, thank you.

new fav word: 'dangersome'

seriously its awsome. the story and the word. hard to describe more, lol sry if this isnt helpful...

FUCKING HOT! I'd love to be "tentacled" by a creature...

This story was perfect, i would love to have this happen to me. Your grammar was a bit weird, but the sexy topic more than made up for it.

matches the discription perfectly don't know about the slime but it worked if u keep writing this could be a story and i personaly want to read it

This is really good, and I want someone to animate it and link it. It would be the best thing ever.

Would have been amazing if the grammer was correct >.>

Typing when you are probably naked, stroking, moaning and thinking is a difficult combo. But text aside, would love to be tentacled too either by myself or with him, even better in a sucking quicksand.

That was hot! I loved it a lot. :)

I totally love this, it's really hot and detailed. I'd love to hear more stories about the tentacle rape on guys more on, add hot male demons too it as well. Make it pop! If you guys wanna kik me my kik is Killerfrostwing2 if you guys wish to role play it.

This had me reaching for ice it was so hot

It made me wish to be raped by this thing!

This was totally hot, I came just thinking about these tentacles fucking me!

I praise the author! It was so electrifying...So real! I'm practically drooling all over myself. Good job!

All I want now is to be raped by this thing. To be held down and sucked on. Nice job!

i love this story if only it would happen in real life.

My dick went inside my body. I'm pregnant now.

This story had me harder than I have been in a long time! I'd love an experience like that! 5 stars all the way!

This was pretty good, but the punctuation and word choice was off/awkward in a couple places. 4/5!

Omg yeah this got me so wet

We don't get enough hentai stories like this where the male is milked dry rather than the cliche tentacle on female crap we see. I'd love a continuation of this personally or just more stories like this that get me hard

Can you make more chapters for this

I'd love that thing to fuck my ass and suck my cock. Geez you did a great job!

Your story was so hot.. I really enjoyed reading it.

Great story. Would be a lot better being an infant that was taken out of it's carrier. Just saying

I’m next damn it. Love these types of stories where it does no good to beg, promise or plead. The tentacles don’t care. They only want your cum.

Incredibly sexy

This story had me pre cumming in my underwear, What a HOT story !

super hot

I think the last line of the story says it all.

The thing most missing, is a story, or an experience. Other then tentacle monster oh my cloths! Holding me I can’t believe it! Fucking me in the ass! (While stroking my cock and nipples)! How could you? No no yes ahhh.

There is too little a story or character between we the readers, and what is too quickly and unartfully your masturbatory fantasy. The fantasy is fine! The idea sexy. Take your time with it, get a bit of distance. Otherwise we wonder just how many orgasms you had, writing it.

would love it if tentacles rape his peehole mm

Hot! I have cummed to this story multiple times.