Last Night

Really good story u could write a ch 2 about her goen to c him at college.
Keep on writing u did a good job.

Good start

Good start for a brother and sister story that has more to tell.
Sister is the kind of woman that goes after what she wants and brother is going to be there to give it to her.
Keep writing it can only get better.
For a site that's for writer I can't believe the person below uses u for you c for see in the commits, that is just lazy!

great start

This should have more chapters to tell how their rerlationship evolved, can't wait for more. So please keep writing.

Short and sweet

The brother sister thing is a great start. The college kids deserve each other especially after they both got dump. Keep writing and don't let anyone discourage you.

Very good

I really liked this story. Her dominant side telling him that she wants him makes this story. Please continue with another chapter in the same manner. This is refreshing read from all the other tripe lately.

not good

wheres the background that tells there was some sexual connection between them? NO WHERE thats where so this is totally unrealistic. if you had given proper background and character development hinting at a previous relationship between them it would be acceptable. as is it sucks.

Rarr! sexy.

i totally got turned on. lol! watching your sis suck a guy while imagining it was you. fuck!