Valentine Head

wow... such an understanding daughter

With a daughter like this

There just has to be more stories to tell. So don't stop now!

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Another LAZY author who uses apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. Pure laziness.

Lazy author ???

Who is this arse who is so quick to find fault with someone who at least is trying to tell a story . If you can't give constructive criticism , shut the fuck up .

re: Another LAZY author...

YOU'RE lazy for not taking the time to learn that single quotes (NOT apostrophes) are common in the UK and that the author is FROM the UK.

I've seen similar posts over the months. If it is the same person, once could have been brushed off for ignorance. If it's the same person, you are just a troll, and a brain dead, lazy on at that.

Valentine

Nice start to a good FUCK story. Anonymous COMMENTS just show cowards that ain't got the guts to give real remarks . Enjoyed the story. Thanks.

what the hell:

there's no way he's gonna actually go out for that date.... not now.......
stay around & completely fuck the daughter

I loved it!

That was hot and sexy. The remark made by Anonymous was lazy in itself. He or she didn't even take the time to leave a critique of the subject matter.

Keep writing. Your story was just fine. We are here to read stories. I certainly couldn't care less about punctuation as long as I understand the story.

Great Detail

I loved this. I hope you follow up with the story of the date, and perhaps then a threesome?

re: Valentine

The net was mostly built on the concept of being anonymous. It's newbies such as yourself that should stay away.

great start to a story-line

This is a great start to a story-line about father & daughter "helping" each other....... I would love more detail on what the daughter looks like though.....

Ignore any negative comments you receive.......remember where shit comes from---assholes!