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First it all it was an excellent revenge and reconcilation story. I read here a similar excellent revenge and reconcilation story from an other super revenge story writer. Papatoad has a story "Telephone Blitz" which is a humorous and a similar Modern Figaro Type revenge story and a good reconcilation story in a story. That readers fellows who like both the revenge and reconcilation stories could enjoy as SS06's gem. BTW 5 stars. Very interesting but some RAAC writers have excellent revenge stories. Sometime an adventure on each-others playground gives us (readers) good stories.

Leave Harry Alone!

When he is sober he seems to write intelligently. His last few story reviews were pretty good. They were coherent and made sense. You also did not imagine spit flying out of his mouth.
But then he comes back and writes like this. Apparently he has fallen off the wagon.

Thanks

Seemed better. thanks.
Everyone stayed in character. and had logical reactions. Nice story flow.

Almost always an outstanding author.

And, this is one of the outstanding tales. Chuckled constantly. Stang might be the only really good posters left in Literotica. Thanks, Stang.

Not for me

Sorry SS but this one was just not that good to me.

In answer to your question

Do neither!!!

I've commented many times on this issue. Finish your story, and then edit the fuck out of it until the whole thing is about 3 odd Lit pages long, keeping all the pertinent info in there.

You have a chance now to actually do it right. So fucking DO IT for once!!

Your question

Stang do the whole story at once. Otherwise I have to wait days for the last chapter and then read it all. This was another good one.

ss06

I'm not much for reconciliation tales but you made it work.

Damn but this one worked well -

I was hoping the ending would be what it was - once in a while a person actually learns from their mistakes. Blanche is presented as one who clearly did - she refused to live as she had , she held to and lived within solid rules, she knew her part in her fate, she did not want to stay that way -

Nicely done and a truly fun read - IMHO

And if it helps Scorrp get back on his writing horse so much the better.

Cool story!!!

I really liked the way you mixed in humor into this one. Even though I'm definitely a "burn the bitch" guy, somehow this reconciliation story worked for me.

Last week when I read one of this authors story I commented that that it was as good as it ever gets.

I was wrong!- again. Thank you SS06 for superb entertainment.

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"She's the kind of person who can just sit there with you for an hour and neither of you ever says a word but you leave the experience thinking that it was the best conversation you've ever had."

Damn that's a good line/sentiment.

Second full read

You know, I have a bunch of nitpicky whiny bitch stuff I could say.

I'm not going to. I liked how the characters were just the characters and played their roles.

I loved the 'she's a fire monster' plot device by the other staff.

I liked her monologues.

I hated hated HATED the Cher reference.

I liked this one muchly and verily.

Haha love the stooges reference..

"Niagara Falls, slowly I turned."
That one line made the story for me haha..
As always yet another great story.. It's nice to see a reconciliation occasionally..

I couldn't find anything

to make it worth less than 5*. (the wife even got it right about Mustang drivers!) :)

Fabulous

This guy really knows how to write and that was a 5* plus story

Grade A+ Story

Well done.
Well written.
Excellent word pictures.
I wish all the stories were this good.

Amazing

It is literally amazing how you are able to come up with so many different stories. They are not rushed, no real vagaries in the plot, very interesting and qwerky characters and last but not least variety. The plethora of situations places and types of people you use could be called genius. I haven't read your entire collection and I have only ever read one and not finished but all your stuff is great

A crazy first wife that actually pulled off a credible reconcile

I liked this story the first time I read it and like it just as well the second time. Well paced and GREAT dialog. The butt-head in VA is a moron. SS06 and MOTB you all do great work.

You probably aren't checking comments very much, but just had to say it - LOVE your stuff.

Always enjoy your stuff Stang!

Ha Ha Ha you always crack me up!!! "Of course, it took a minute and a half to get up to that speed and the car shook like a dog after a bath once you got past 35." Ha Ha Ha!!! Keep writing brother!!!

one of the few reconciliation stories I liked

Some of the lines in here were absolutely memorable and hilarious. Maybe it was that humour that let me get over the cheating parts without leaving a bad taste in my mouth. It also made me more agreeable to the eventual makeup.

Itty bitty titty ...ha ha ha ha

Great just simply great!

Wow! A little life beat from your usual venue but delightful and funny. Thank you!

I'd leave a comment, but...

I don't want Blanche to fire me:)

Re-read...

I guess I've changed since I read this the first time. I remember hating the ending, being pissed that she ended up happy; that he took her back. Now, I'm relieved that they both ended up happy. Great story.

Ooo-kay

I DO like a happy ending, and over all I guess I'm glad it all worked out.

But I'm still bothered by how it all started. All right, she had a little too much to drink and she slept with her boss, but how does she get from there to continuing to sleep together?

And I can sort of understand her trying to go in from a position of strength, but accusing HIM of having an affair? Claiming it was HIS "neglect" that forced her to look elsewhere? Talk about using the nuclear option!

end

probably the best reconciliation story I've read.

Wow!

I don't know how this one got by me, but jeepers wasn't this super.

Nice

Probably your best story.

IF!!!

If anyone could write a cheater story where the couple get back together without pissing me off AND actually making me happy that they did, well...it would be you (the author)!!! And of course this story is one the examples why. Seriously, sometimes I wish that more wives would read stories like this one, no, not to be scared faithful (although that would not be a bad thing) but to give them real insight into the male mind. Most men understand how male predators work, and if told honestly what is happening from the first move that they make will jump to defend their mate before any damage to the marriage can occur. It all comes down to the magic word, trust. If more wives would simply trust their husbands to understand and take care of the situation and them there would be a lot fewer divorces.

I loved the story

and all the references to so many different characters, starting of course, with the muppets.
the only bad thing about reading an SS06 saga is trying to get the songs out of my head long after finishing.

never fails

to entertain an engross the reader. Reconciliation after so long is a stretch that only SS could off.

FOR EVERY REASON GIVEN

people want a do-over. TK U MLJ LV NV

So much fun

Great story, love it...

Just more RAAC bullshit

See title above.

Nice

Nice story,I would like to see more of this,where wife is truly sorry for cheating

Can't stop

Every time I read this story I can't stop laughing is great. Thank you

hilarious

funny as hell SS well readable 5

1* Cuckold/Wimp/Creampie Eating RAAC Bullshit!

Title says it all.

WoW! Matt Moreau Special by SS06 Cuck Apologist.

Surprise ending!!! After Blanche cheated on Denton, turning slut and shitting all over her marriage vows, Denton divorces her. Way to go Big D!
Later when slut Blanche is finally living up to her potential as a Motel cleaning services supervisor, who checks in but Denton. Blanche sees Denton, Denton ignores Blanche, Blanche sneaks into Denton's room and fucks him.
Denton becomes a Matt Moreau brain dead, wimp, pussy-whipped, cuckold and takes Slut Blanche back.
One story that goes from gold to shit.

screw all the bad comments

I loved the humor, loved the story. Time heals a lot of wounds. Great job thanks much.