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An Accidental Love God Ch. 01

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by Anonymous02/16/12

Very Good

Very good story. The ending was a little premature. You need to continue this. There is so much to work with here. Thanks for a great start but try to edit just a little more and it will be perfect.

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by SirCarl02/16/12

Yes, do continue.

Very good. Please do more.

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by C_frommn03/19/12

Sorry For His Luck

Wish I was the Lucky Bastard he has everything a beautiful wife and any HOTT womam he wants.

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by Anonymous11/29/12

More Please!

Good start--- where will this lead???

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