Jack

A very good start

I hope she teaches him how to eat pussy and how to use his huge fat cock in her pussy.

Thanks for the good read.

Not worth a comment.

Nothing.

The Tease

The Tease: An enticement with the promise of more. Well done you have picquet our interest. Now can you deliver the rest. A brilliant start, good opening and introduction to the characters without dragging the story on. Sometimes I just want meat and potatoes no extra fixings. You've done that without making your story Porn. Nothing wrong with porn mind you but there is a talent to erotica just look at the work of Andrew Blake and Michael Ninn. (5 Stars)

Why?

Why bother submitting something that is obviously not finished?

Apologies

I forgot to include Chapter 1 in the title, a mistake, for this I apologise.

To the reader who wrote to call me a moron for this mistake, thank you. The lesson has been learnt.

Great start!

It always get me, the people that leave negative comments, usually don't leave a name to look them up by. Either they don't write in the same catagory, or their stories SUCK!
I think this is a great start. It has me looking for more. Continue with this storyline. Teach JJ the proper way to take care of his women.

Nothing?

There is nothing left to BE said! It's a great story!

More please sir

I hope you continue the story. you have a fine talent for graphic detail.

I want to please a male partner

fantastic story

Cool story. It's hot how the mom just lets her son use her however he wants.

I love this. This is how all sons should be taught by there Master Father and their sub Mother. Thank you for sharing