Seriously? Of all the categories you put this in romance? He practically forced himself on her. She might have enjoyed it, but the guy is a dickhead, and she was stupid to accept things just like that. I'm not saying it was bad, but definitely not romantic.
Erotic Coupling, not Romance
That was about as romantic as a flu shot. Enjoyable, but not Romance.
First rate stroke
But the previous poster was right - it was misclassified to put in mildly - Romance it isn't
Some editing to make the time line absolutely clear would be helpful - I did give it 5 stars, though
Romance???
Seriously? Of all the categories you put this in romance? He practically forced himself on her. She might have enjoyed it, but the guy is a dickhead, and she was stupid to accept things just like that. I'm not saying it was bad, but definitely not romantic.
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