All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 09'

I so love this story but so wish the chapters were longer,, next...

Not probably the reaction the writer wants but this story is fun and cute.

Thank you for your comments. It is GREAT fun them. And what on earth makes you think that a writer wouldn't want to read that their story is fun and cute. I think all the characters are cute, especially Bridge... and wait until you meet Serif... Phew. And it's supposed to be fun :)

I just love Bridge, but wow, that Taz is something else, lol! Instead of being pissed or upset, lol... he wants to do it again! ;)

Very well written. Your characterizations are wonderful. Love the pace and the slow revelations about the different characters.

I could wish the chapters were longer -- you 're such a tease! But at least you post often. Looking forward to more.

I just lo-ove Bridge.

He sounds so sweet!

I'm getting hardcore reminders of a story call Paradise Lost now...