All Comments on 'The Butt Plug'

Hi, Good esssence to your story - and it would be great if you could add a bit more 'warm up' on the words, a little softer entry if you will.

Thanks for the read.

Great subject. Needs more build up of action and show of reactions of both giver and receiver. Don't be in a hurry, a good story like good foreplay should be done slowly and deliberately for explosive results !