All Comments on 'Bitchy MILF and the Delivery Boy'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptabout 12 years ago
NIce.

I had a feeling she needed to be fucked, and dominated while being fucked. I can't wait to find out how the rest of his sex life goes.

Please write another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Every slut has big tits

And they all have 'eraser-sized nipples'.

Jesus, use some imagination. If you have any.

talespinner0559talespinner0559about 12 years agoAuthor
I welcome all comments, good and bad.

I have been enjoying the stories here for years. I finally decided to try my hand at it. This is my first story, and it was finally published after a few rejections and some work on my "skills." I know I have a long way to go, but it's a start and I will learn from the comments and criticisms here. Thanks and happy reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Brilliant Story

Another chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great job

Excellent in every way to include length. Don't stop

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hilarious

It's absolutely hilarious. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
just poor

no further comment needed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Cool

Sure got me hard! Brilliant story.

buttcheeks777buttcheeks777about 12 years ago
I love it!

I love this story! My cock is ready to erupt, I can't believe that I could hold off this long.

Yes, Yes! Another chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good thing you're not married..

Wow! So descriptive. Good thing you're not married, or your wife would be PRETTY upset right now! WOW! What a story..

talespinner0559talespinner0559about 12 years agoAuthor
I am married.

I am married. The only option was Dating Status and it didn't give a choice for married, so I left it blank, thinking it wouldn't show up. Live and learn. But you're right, she's not happy at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
The bad comments

Are by lit idiots. Very hot story. Love it.

movies_maidens_n_manmeatmovies_maidens_n_manmeatover 11 years ago
Why not some Ass to Mouth @ the End ?

Hot story. Could even be hotter by introducing some ATM when he fucks her ass.

What about

As I slipped my cock out of her ass, I said "sure, clean my cock if you really want it". She hungrily sucked my cock, covered with her ass juice, for a couple of minutes. To complete humiliation I filled her mouth with another load of my creamy cum. As I zipped up, I reminded her

" you still owe me $42.00"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
oh my god

I'm a girl this made me so horny I couldn't help but get my boyfriend to strip me and act it out , he fucked me hard and it was the best shag ever

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
She deserved that

Very hot, good detail. really enjoyed it...sometimes A bitchy woman needs to be done like that

BellamialoveBellamialoveabout 8 years ago
??

Story is ok but what is milf mean?

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****HOT read and she was got good in the end!! Thanks for sharing.

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