I'm sorry to say the dialog seemed rather stillted. There appeared to be to much "do you like this? Very nice" stuff. It really didn't flow or sound natural. Resulting in somewhat less enjoyable sex. But it is a great premise.
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Anonymous02/20/12
The catagory is Incest/Taboo!
Why is it that every time a taboo type story with just a mention of incest comes along, someone just has to gripe that it is in the wrong catagory?
That "/" reads as "OR" so that puts this piece just where it belongs! This kind of an open sexual relationship is considered Taboo in most religious circles, incest or not.
I must agree the dialog is a bit cheesy, but, Give it a chance? The only sort of a negative I noticed is every character except "mom" had a name. Maybe that could be corrected in a sequal?
In a fantasy world with no need to think about consequences, I thought this was a nice stimulating stroke story. Who needs dialog when there are two attractive nude and horny women who want to ride your cock?
There were a few times when I needed to remind myself that this was just a story, and I hoped for the writer's sake that it was just a fantasy.
Karen mentioned that she was on the pill, and that she slept with many guys, but there was no concern about STDs. Greg might be on the receiving end of more than a good time.
Susan did not mention whether she was using birth control, so Greg might be leaving her with a different type of gift.
The family incest suggested that there may have been sexual abuse in earlier years, and such abuse has an emotional cost for anyone who associates with the abuser or the abused. Greg may also find that Jack and/or Dennis are not strictly heterosexual and they are not inhibited about Greg not wanting to explore that area.
Finally, there was the risk of skin cancer from sun exposure without adequate protection.
However, given that this was just a story on a site where there is no requirement that the stories be tales of true events, I enjoyed the fantasy. It was hot.
This is a nice story. This would need a second chapter to satisfy the people who said this is not incest. It would be nice that next time Greg join the family let Dennis have sexual intercourse with his sister or Mother and Greg was so thrilled to watched it.
Then they will all have a full family sex orgy with Greg joining in.
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Anonymous06/26/12
Best of Frriends!!!
I wish i had friends such as this family as I was growing up. It sure would have prepared me for married life.
English
Not incest
maybe group sex or erotic couplings, but not a incest story.
Taboo?
It's Taboo though. The category is incest/taboo.
Interesting story... but.
I'm sorry to say the dialog seemed rather stillted. There appeared to be to much "do you like this? Very nice" stuff. It really didn't flow or sound natural. Resulting in somewhat less enjoyable sex. But it is a great premise.
The catagory is Incest/Taboo!
Why is it that every time a taboo type story with just a mention of incest comes along, someone just has to gripe that it is in the wrong catagory?
That "/" reads as "OR" so that puts this piece just where it belongs! This kind of an open sexual relationship is considered Taboo in most religious circles, incest or not.
I must agree the dialog is a bit cheesy, but, Give it a chance? The only sort of a negative I noticed is every character except "mom" had a name. Maybe that could be corrected in a sequal?
Nice fantasy
In a fantasy world with no need to think about consequences, I thought this was a nice stimulating stroke story. Who needs dialog when there are two attractive nude and horny women who want to ride your cock?
There were a few times when I needed to remind myself that this was just a story, and I hoped for the writer's sake that it was just a fantasy.
Karen mentioned that she was on the pill, and that she slept with many guys, but there was no concern about STDs. Greg might be on the receiving end of more than a good time.
Susan did not mention whether she was using birth control, so Greg might be leaving her with a different type of gift.
The family incest suggested that there may have been sexual abuse in earlier years, and such abuse has an emotional cost for anyone who associates with the abuser or the abused. Greg may also find that Jack and/or Dennis are not strictly heterosexual and they are not inhibited about Greg not wanting to explore that area.
Finally, there was the risk of skin cancer from sun exposure without adequate protection.
However, given that this was just a story on a site where there is no requirement that the stories be tales of true events, I enjoyed the fantasy. It was hot.
Nice exciting story
This is a nice story. This would need a second chapter to satisfy the people who said this is not incest. It would be nice that next time Greg join the family let Dennis have sexual intercourse with his sister or Mother and Greg was so thrilled to watched it.
Then they will all have a full family sex orgy with Greg joining in.
Best of Frriends!!!
I wish i had friends such as this family as I was growing up. It sure would have prepared me for married life.
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