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I Thought She Made You Up Ch. 02

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by Rad'l02/27/12

Excellent tale, well told.

A few technical problems with HRt (hard carriage returns) prolly caused during editing but a minor distraction at most.

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by sbrooks10307/23/15

Good So Far

Based on the beginning of Ch 1, apparently Looney and CeCe don't get together, even though they seem to be pointed in that direction.

I assume it will all work out in the later chapters.

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by Anonymous09/11/15

Another strong 4

Congrats. Another strong 4. Very hot scene on the porch. No further comments until the end.

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by JasonRTaylor11/20/15

A very fun read

The characters are genuine and a the story is flowing along nicely despite flashbacks.
J

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by Anonymous05/31/16

What happened to chapter one?

When I read this originally, chapter one was there. Now it is not there. I liked it with chapter one. Will chapter one return? Also, I thought that this was a great story. I would like to see this one expanded into a book.

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by Anonymous07/08/16

The first chapter?

Qhml1 probably had to give exclusive rights to someone who is going to publish the story and wants to use chapter one as a free 'teaser' to promote it.

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by Anonymous10/17/16

THE FIRST CHAPTER?

http://storiesonline.net/s/10499:158146/i-thought-s he-made-you-up-romantic-love-story-chapter-1

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