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WELL,
keep going....
good stuff
Keep it coming you bookmarked!
Another excellent chapter.
You got me hooked with your storytelling; well above average. My opinion, I admit. I sampled your story 'cause I've ridden bikes for many years and was interested to see how you would weave riding into the tale.
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I found the first 3 chapters to be worth reading; I hope that the story hasn't ended.
Total drivel.
One of the worst! 1 star!
The previous anon says he doesn't like it.
But he seems to be coming back to read every chapter!!!
Great story!
Just garbage.
Its amazing what sometimes come out of a writers ass. "1*".
Dear Anonomous
Whew! I didn't think you were going to grace us with your witty, insightful comments there for awhile. Ann[do you mind if I call you Ann? It seems like we've bonded], Thanks so much. Apparently you've gone back and read everything I've ever written, and took the time and trouble to comment on them all. That must make you my biggest fan. I'm a little troubled though, Ann. You have repeatedly called me a thief and I don't understand why. My wife says maybe I've stolen your affections.
If that's the case, let me apologize. I didn't mean to lead you on. I'm sure you're REALLY cute and have a great personality, but I've been with my wife for 31 years and I'm not inclined to make a domestic adjustment at this time. We'll always have Literotica, though. I'm about to post two new stories and can't wait for your feedback.
Pleas Ann, don't be a stranger.
Love you, mean it
QHML1
OK qhml, but only if I can call you Hugo.
And its Annabel. I see you are still up to your old tricks. It's good to see that some people are persistent. And I wish you luck,you will need it,sooner or later. You see,what goes around comes around..
I like this series - 5 stars
Don't know why Ann doesn't like it. Interesting and well written.
LMAO!
It must be a "Love-Hate" relationship that keeps Ann coming back for more, but complaining about it each time. She's most assuredly "in touch with her feminine side" to be such a "bitch!" (j/k) I bet Ann's a hottie to have that kind of attitude! ;-)
I've enjoyed every story so far, and I hope that you keep on writing! (Here's the deal--you keep on writing them and I'll keep on giving them 5's!) Actually, they've all earned them so far; there's even a few i would've given higher ratings, if I could.
Enjoy!
Big K
Missed something
When a girl passes out like that there is one thing that HAS to be done :- Shave her pussy!
Kicked his bike?
A temper tantrum induced kicking of his bike by a no-fucking-until-marriage twit that required re-painting of a tank. No reason to keep her unless daddy's money is a draw. Well written and I'm enjoying it. Interested to see where it goes.
Thoughts
Let’s see, she wants to stay a virgin, which is TOTALLY her right.
But she has to sneak around with him, which isn’t really right, and they have made NO commitments to each other, so by what right is she acting jealous?
I was SURE he was going to find her with another guy when he went to the college.
Still fun
Can't see how it will end well, but fun for now.
J
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