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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/26/12

about time

very good good to see some one can sinish a short story

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by Anonymous03/21/13

Very well written, loved the story :)

Very well written, read very smooth and flowed well, nicely done. :)

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by Anonymous11/17/13

Epic

Grammar was flawless, ended really well, great detain. 5 stars :)

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