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by Roge472xal02/21/12

Thr Rating

I don't know if it is my machine or if it is the site's fault, but I have been unable to rate both this story and your prior one, so add a 5 to each of them for me, please! :-)
Roger

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by NymphMyosotis02/21/12

There seems to be a problem

Yes, I noticed that there seems to be a problem with the voting system and I don't think it's only on my stories. :((

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by Anonymous02/21/12

I got a "Thank You For Voting - Your Score:"

[it was a 5]

The problem may be over, your other story is showing a 4.57 and a red H, which means that it has received more than 10 votes to make up this average to get the "Hot" rating.

This one was a great one-pager. You put a lot into that one page, and didn't miss a beat while doing it.

I normally pass on Sci Fi and Fantasy, but I gotta read your "Inside His World"

LitID: Tyro999
email: oj3usmc@yahoo.com

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by NymphMyosotis02/21/12

Problem resolved

The problem has been resolved and both of my stories can receive votes again. :)

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by Anonymous03/14/12

good story, more foreplay

Very erotic but needs more build up rather than jumping right into the sex. That creates more anticipation and eagerness to read on .

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by texasace05/17/12

You have amazing talent...

Your mastery of word painting is unbelievable. With each sentence you fill in all the lines of your schetch and end up with a beautiful masterpiece. Keep writing... you are GREAT!!
Ace

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by prop6906/17/12

Great story

Had me hard from the start. I need to buy me a cabin!

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by PanamaJaxxx09/04/12

Cabin Fever

Now we all want to visit your cabin as you painted a wonderfully visual story. I can close my eyes and see this tale come to life.xxx

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by othbndy09/26/12

Intoxicating

Beautiful story, very tastefully done.....I was wrapped up in the plot from the first paragraph.

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by Lia Monde11/24/12

Dreamlike romantic fantasy

An enveloping story of arousal and climax. The descriptive imagery produced a beautiful sense of place and drew the reader in to living the fantasy.

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