Completeness

Editing

Is a wonderful thing. I am sorry but it is so hard to read with all the typos. I think if you pull it, have it edited, and resubmitted your scores would be better. It is just unreadable as is.

These reads like it was translated from another language, but not well.

You need a light-handed editor

There are some errors that show you are not a native speaker, and those need to be fixed. On the other hand, that slight awkwardness is part of the charm of your style, and I wouldn't want to lose that. So try to find an editor who will be sensitive to this and not blue-pencil your style into oblivion.

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