All Comments on 'Bad Wiring'

You are indeed Maestro with this first submission to Literotica. Encore! Encore!

That was amazing. The twist of being caught by her mum was perfect. <3 xx

Maestro

If this is the first time you have written you have to promise you will not stop....

This story was so original and kinky it's off the scale ,

It deserved a 10 star and a promise you will cum back here with your ingenius , erotic mind and write more original hot stories for us

holy shit that was fucking wicked so sinfully delicious!!!!!

More!!! Keep it going!!!

It was just WOW! Sinful and intense. Please keep writing.

Omg I got sooo wet reading this.....got off very easily ;)

What a nasty slut Paige is. Its great Laurie has the same potential. Lucky Daddy!! More, please.

That was absolutely cream-a-lishess keep it up, and make more for all male readers to keep it up.

I am so fucking wet right now, I'm going to read it again and cum so hard!!!

That was so fucking nasty, I wish there was more of it.

Your story was filthy, perverted and sick! Thank you for writing it. More please.

"1*" !

cock is so hard and cum all over my fist while jerking off. hot, hard on story.

Whatta awesome hot story. I squirted all over myself. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

Loved every second of it

The set up was a tad bit weird but the overall storie was fantastic. FIVE fucking stars

So hot my cock shot up. So exciting as the daughter was obeyed and I had to cum. Please keep writing like this.

Incredibly hot! Don't care for the mother being berated(I like a bit more kind and loving story) but everything else was fantastic! Bookmarked, hope to read more!

Was good til you cuckhold the mom! And totally not realistic!

Hot!!! I love that fucked up daughter! Oh I def want more. Made me so fucking hard. Another page and I'd have busted for sure.

Looks like the start of a lovely crazy relationship, could be a great series! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.