All Comments on 'Laura Moves In With Dad And Stepmum'

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BonoVox99BonoVox99about 12 years ago
This was pathetic

worst story ever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good story

Not really sure what the other person is talking about not pathetic or bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hoping for A follow up

Good story. I urge you to think about writing a new chapter, just about that subject, the domination / submission relationship with Laura's father and Claire. Keep on doing your best.Perhaps the psychological part of Laura's thoughts, her mental struggle between what she wants and what is right isn't long enough, but still a very good subject to write on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lovely Story

Ignore that earlier comment this was a good plot. Only problem is it was a bit short. Now that the Laura is now completely the good girl gone bad, there isn't any thrill to her anymore. It would be better to make a new set of characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hope it gets better

If there is ever a sequel, I hope the story gets better.

JhMcKnJhMcKnover 1 year ago

Spice the sequqel up a little bit with some pissing on the part of all three of them. Perhaps Claire needs to slip on a garter belt and some full fashioned dark stockings and stand over Laura and piss all over her.

Just ideas.

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