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Subterrane Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/22/12

Neat sequel ...

... thanks.

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by Etaski02/22/12

And thank you for reading. :)

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by Anonymous02/22/12

Thanks for continuing this story.

I remember wondering what would happen next at the end of the last feisty, edgy, and well written story. Now I'm finding out. Good story, thanks.
Yves

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by meridin02/22/12

this is getting interesting

She should of killed the dwarf, but the lust spikes sure will make this trip interesting for her.

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by Anonymous02/25/12

siranna is back!

i like this char and your writing style. 5 * when the voting works again.

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by cantfightfate02/26/12

Good start!

I'm looking forward to more!

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by AnotherWannabe05/26/14

You have turned a bog-standard D&D encounter into a gripping read. Nice work.

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by fanfare06/16/14

"...curse not the darness..."

Etaski, It's been nagging the back of my mind, that in the Subterranean darkness available modes of sight, without an available light, could not read two-dimensional characters.

All these clever people and no one has thought to develop writing systems based on intaglio such as engravings or embossed such as Braille? Either would be legible to any of the non-light vision methods you mentioned.

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