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Incest??
Wrong category
Keep it up
Continue the story man its going really well, compared to half the stories on here it has structure, on the ball grammar and is interesting to the point of keeping you on the edge rather than taking it too far.
Its nicely formatted as well and not too much to read, please make a continuation.
Where's the next chapter?
Seriously, where the hell is the sequel to this wonderful story? It's been over a year and a half and nothing. So where is it?
dam good story
Sequel please!!! One of the best authors on this site!
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker
Crap he fills he up but does not worry about buns in ovens
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