Letting the Right One In

I really liked this. I would have liked MORE though. I would have like to have seen it fleshed out some.

Very good

It was good, but well hurried too. More development would have made it better for me It needed more descriptive sex to be truly erotic. I would enjoy if you added more to this, or wrote a similar indepth version. The ending though was perfect!
Thank you!
M1

4.5 stars

Good story but it goes too fast, particularly at the ending. She decides she wants a baby; he, led by his little head, agrees. This is a formula for disaster unless the parties - meaning the author - sets the scene to show that the couple is capable of dealing with all having a child involves.

In other words, omit the ending and leave the couple where they were the day after they first hooked up