All Comments on 'You're Mine Now'

Part 2...PLEASE!!!!!!!

Please write more and add some detailed pussy licking! i want to hear her beg for it!

I loved it! I read a lot of stories on this .com but this one is the only one that stood out to me. Part 2 please.

Great story, I loved the e joint...and the thrill of fucking while the cops are after you:)

It's a bit unexpected, maybe even surreal, that this flirtation with the library boy turns into this drug-laced on-the-edge thing, but it works out very entertainingly!

You guys are awesome. I will have to work on part 2 now. It has been awhile since I've written so I really appreciate your feedback. :-)

Hi my name is lori, ireally (sorry new phone) what czI really wanted to about was how, exciting your story was. My favorite part was when they were in the alleyway; I loved it when he got close to her,i got so excited cause I love it when a man takes charge. I know I'm being passive-aggressive, I just don't know how to say I liked your story but I thought it needed this. I know thats just my opinion. However, I liked it enough that this is the first one i've ever responded to. Well Done.

very good story. can't wait for it to continue.

Where's the sequel?

I can see this leading down the spiral corruption road which I love.