All Comments on 'My Mother's Show'

I would hope that as time passes, he would get to make love to his mother and enjoy her body, as they both seem in need of a lover.

There could be a great mother and son sexual relationship to be told.

Could of? It's could have.

to short i hate 1 page stories

A mediocre story with no real ending, should invest in a dictionary and use spellcheck if you try again

"My relationship with my mother had always been full of paternal love"????

Ummmm.......Shoudn't that be MATERNAL?

... and boring. And why the change from past tense to present?

...really, in spite of those anonymous cowards. As if they have anything to write about either. A few technical goofs, but I still got hard, enjoyed the realism.

THE STORY WAS NICE. BE IT TRUTH OR FICTION. KEEP UP THE WORK. OH DID YOU EVER NOTICE THAT PEOPLE WHO WRITE BAD COMMENTS NEVER LEAVE THERE NAME THEY ALWAYS CHICKEN SHIT LEAVE ANONYMOUS. AGAIN THANKS FOR POSTING.

In your next chapter, mom should have a discussion with him about the cum stained carpet, and let him know she knew he was standing outside her door.And then invite him in to get a close up view.

You really need to work on your language skills. Many spelling errors and sentence structure left much to be desired.€€€€

Anonymous comments should be ignored. These people are just jealous cowards who couldnt string a sentence together if they tried.

Realistic story and actions. Many mom's know about son's behavior and ignore it. It can be better to address it and begin a training program. There are great benefits

Too painful to read!

I couldn't get past the third paragraph.

The author had the courage to attempt to get his/her story in print. This he/she did. Unfortunately there is not enough character nor plot development to offer suggestions on this story.