All Comments on 'Lily's Blackmail Ch. 01'

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verbicideverbicideabout 12 years ago
Ooh, I know...

She calls the cops and they bust the little pervert and send him to jail, where meaner men turn him into the bitch he deserves to be.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 12 years ago
That would be the obvious solution ...

... but, as this has been named Chapter 01, I can't see that happening! I certainly hope it doesn't happen that way, but it would be an interesting twist!

Please bring us Chapter 02 so we can find out for sure! Five stars and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Interesting

Like the direction it's heading. keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
love it

Love the build up and can't wait for the next installment. Fantastic

jpalsgrjpalsgrabout 12 years ago
Like the direction

Like the direction your moving this tale, how far are you going to push and change Lily? Make this story zing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
A great start!

Excellent beginning. I love the use of time frames, and whats not to love about teachers?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hope you finnish this one

Need part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Started well but.......

Where's the other half of the story for here?

illk95588illk95588over 9 years ago
Good start but where's the rest of the story...

Has an ending been posted elsewhere?

keystone00000keystone00000over 9 years ago
finish the damn story

apparently this author isn't going to write a chapter 2. Why doesn't someone else finish it. I thought the first chapter was pretty hot and has a lot of potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More?

Without more this story is like those bitches in high school who tease without any follow through!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
u have to do more

don't leave me hanging.... lets see how he gets back a his teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good start of a story like to read more !

Definitely like to read more of this story

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