All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 11'

It is simply complex. I grows with each chapter and I cannot wait to find out where it will go and just whom will all this undying love bring forth. Hidden strengths, fears, love?! Thank you for this. It's interesting that the title is Fallen, because everyone is falling or growing to understanding, love and acceptance. All the things that everyone struggles with in real life. The HOTTTT sex scenes also show growth or trust and even surprise in the intensity. Wow, just wow. I did not know what to expect when I started this story, but damn am I GLAD I found you. Keep up the great work. Your imagination is AMAZING!!!!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. There is an intensity that drew me in, especially with Luma. I love all of your characters, and am hoping you will continue with this wonderful adventure.

now this is getting bloody good...... i think you have to many people in this . however some of my earlier comments were a little harsh however this last peice was breath taking.

im sooooo happy that star is so badass and he refuses to meekly hand himself over to luma write on!!!!!!