by dweaver999
Glad to see the return of this series. Well written, as usual. :)
Happy to see this continued... would give you a 5 but the stupid thing isn't working currently.
Been following you for a good time, you're so cruel leaving us all on this cliff hanger. ^_^ Looking forward for the next chapter.
One little formal detail though. Currently new pronouns are developing for hermaphrodites ("it" is considered rude to use). Shi for he/she, hir for his/her and shir for sir/mam/madame are considered the favorites for true herms. There are separate ones for cyclic/choice based hermaphrodites, but that may or may not come up and often they just may go with their current gender state. Otherwise perfect! I also will always love the inside joke that Dolmen Drive was discovered by accident and that even the experts think it makes no sense. It does have a good set of ups and downs for excellent plot-spinning.
Anonomous,
Thanks for the info on pronouns. I'll try to post an update if my teaching and writing schedule allows me.
Dave
You have an incredibly fertile imagination! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Oh goodness, this is so good. Next chapter please :D. (although I'm sure you have a real life and understand about all that, it's just so good!)
I'm speechless! The way you've managed to keep the readers riveted is awesome! If not the next chapter, at least post some updates about when will we be having it :)
Is there going to be another chapter or are you not going to finish like most of the writers on this website?
Awesome series, pity you have taken a break from writing i hope to see more of it in the future :)
i only leave comments on the ends of series. I have read all the galactic (woman) series. Please continue it.
This is fantastic - what happened to it??? Where did it go?!
Nooooooooooo!
Please post the rest...
Its been a while since this story was updated, are you going to post more? please dont leave us hanging! I just love it! Please come back soon!
I didn't think I'd like this style of writing, but I'm hooked. The Amber stories are the same. I know you can't rush the muse, if inspiration strikes, it would be wonderful. Thank You
And very interesting alien sex. It really is amazing all of the unique ways of sexing that you have come up with.
I am partial to bunnygirls, if it should happen to come up *wink* Thanks for writing this story, I cannot wait to read the rest!
Please finish writing this series and get it posted. I really am enjoying it not just for the great alien sex but for the story itself.
Damn! Come back and continue to write. This story was great!
What a fantastic uiniverse! I would love to see more of this story.
This is a great story, I hope you will find a way to finish it some day.
I am reading all of your writing and can only hope that it can be finished to tell all of the story that is left.