by MatthewVett
Thank you for continuing with this story. The plot and amount of detail in the story is intoxicating. I can't wait for Megan and Eric to go further!!!
the right mix of romance and sex. i'm really looking forward to what happens next.
This story is the perfect balance between romance and sex. I don't have anything else to say other than : "please more !!".
Keep up this very good job.
I sincerely hope you continue on with this story!! It's one of my all time favorites and I'm desperate for more!!
Please? Lol, this was pretty good. Looking forward to whatever happens next. Please keep it coming.
If anyone has ideas about what sort of stuff they'd like to see in future installments, shoot me an email at LiquidMatthew@gmail.com.
Very, very sensual and erotic. I do hope that you continue. I am seriously desiring what you wrote. I want the sensuality not just the sex. I can't wait till you get to the anal.
Your stories are terrific, very innocent and sensual. I hope you'll write more.
it took me some time but I found out a woman like this is what turns me on. Wish I had one in my life. It would be so much happier.
In a very good way I mean. I read your first story about the girl who used a remote control on a guy. I laugh and laugh until I cried it was done so tastefully and with such humor I could not help myself. I don't think I laugh like that for years. Call me a pervert but the way you wrote that story it was erotic humor at it's best. Then these two part stories about the transvestite and her male roommate so very well written. You have a way with writing I'm certain you could write anything and be successful. Good work keep it going. Thank you
Part 3 is being written! Unfortunately I'm traveling soon, but I'm trying to get it up before I go!
There's such a wonderful sense of innocence immersed in this terrific story. Great passion, great sex, yes. But most of all it reads like a blossoming love story, and I like that. Thanks.
This is such a great storyline!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep going and going and going!!!!! Cannot wait to here about the first FUCK!!!! God, u r good at describing sex and emotion!
Megan is such a pixie type personality that it's nearly impossible to not love her! I'm not into erotic sexualities, except for pure, unadulterated, blood-related male and female incestual partners, however, Megan I could see myself falling into her good graces. I suppose it's because I'm a "softie", compassionate, caring, emotional and look at bad situations with empathy and, to some degree, sympathy. I don't however have sympathy nor compassion for able-bodied free-loaders, the non-producers that feast at the trough of those that contribute to the economic fabric of our society.
The fact that her "new" self-confessed boyfriend that she has happily accepted really brings out the emotional feelings for this unusual couple! The character's demeanor and dialogue is superbly developed and writing with such style the visuals and aura's of the couple seem to be within the midst of the reader. The story is sensual, personality exotic, and seems to have the indredients for a lasting relationship.
Loved ch 2 even more, well written , and very thoughtful . Wish I was Eric getting the mouthful at the end!
I enjoyed parts 1 and 2, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
I'd love to experience it... amazing... shot my load across the table.
I would do anything to have a tgirl like her!
I would happily marry her.
She sounds a lot like my girl! Sometimes I'm still coming to terms with the fact that I'm not going to be able to rub my vagina against another girl's until she can afford a surgery, but this kind of thing is making it better for me, for sure. Thank you.
@FreakFantasy, I'm glad I could be of help! Hope you enjoy the rest of the series!
I swear, aside from the addition of tits and a cock and subtraction of the vagina, Megan sounds QUITE a bit like me, personality-wise. XD
I have to say, I love that you clarified Megan is transsexual and not just a hermaphrodite. Very honest of you, and uncaring towards the haters. As a fellow author, I can respect and admire that.
Also, as a pansexual who enjoys the trans just as much as the girls and boys, (and, I'm ashamed to admit considering the subject matter of this story, a fan of guy-on-guy), I AM enjoying the "transgirl x male" romance, as most hentai or erotica I read are, sadly, a genderqueer girl with a girl or another genderqueer girl.
Also, hadaka apron... Why must you put a transgirl in just an apron, AND tag it with the Japanese term? *is an otaku* I was secretly VERY much hoping Megan would get a tent in it, or Little Megan would peek out from under it. The mention of how low-cut it was got to me, too. I'm a breast fanatic. XD
*speaking of tents, is very much gigging at a GIRL being described as "pitching a tent" due to having the sense of humor of a third grader*
@CyberWeasel89
Well, I'm definitely happy to hear there are real life Megans out there, even if there's a bit of a discrepancy in anatomy. When it comes to writing, I always follow the manta of the MST3K writers: "The right people will get it." I don't mind being niche or obscure. There's always an appreciative audience somewhere, yeah?
I just love hadaka apron. I think it's appeared in at least three stories already. It's just a beautiful outfit.
These two college kids are sweet and adorable, they are well written and I want to see what you will do with other 'new' characters in their story. More please, and then some more also, thank you.
So..Having read Pt 2 I'm loving it..The plot is progressing in such a natural way. It's got that element of shyness, love, & bonding... I dream of this happening to me one day... Thank you Matthew for these tales.
Love this story. It’s very human. A vulnerable, non-cliche, emerging love. Keep going.
Nice story, very different from others here.
Hope you continue with writing.
This story is cute and lewd at the same time and I love it!
(a note for the author: where you wrote "transsexual" ("When he found out I was transsexual, he dumped me and told the whole school.") it should most likely be "intersex" "When he found out I was intersex, he dumped me and told the whole school."))