Good Girl

love it!

Another wonderful story from you, Dr. Mabeuse. My eyes lit up when I saw there was a new one by you. The desire and passion are palpable; the eroticism intense. Thank you!

Well-Deserved Reputation

You certainly deserve the high ranking you enjoy. Good story!

My First Time to Read Your Work

What a great story. I truly enjoyed the whole thing. Thank you.

Great story. Beautifully written and extremely explicit and graphic. Well worth the length

Wonderfully nasty!

It's a gem of a story. It works because of its vivid setting in the hidden, gaudy little pearl of a neighborhood, at once a despised ruin and a demi monde magnet. Two characters find reprieve and release in one another from their very different confinements.

A skillfully and seductively woven tale.

You're back!

So good to see your name on a new story, I opened it like the present it was. High class and hot as to be expected! Cheers

Very erotic and down right hot

Loved this story.I just pictured myself as Becca.Your writing id fantastic,very very hot.

YOU ARE BACK!!!!

So excited to read from you again. I loved every second reading it. Amazing work! i hope you around for a while again. Please keep writing!!!

You never disappoint

Thank you for a lust-filled morning spent reading yet another beautifully written story. There's a reason you are The Master at erotica. You seduce with your words and leave me weak and aching to surrender.

Yeah

It was so much fun to find a new post of yours. Kinda like an unexpected present. Hopefully more to come in the future.

YES!!!

So glad to see a new story! What a wonderful treat! You never, ever disappoint!

Like everyone else....

.....so glad you are back! you're my favorite.

thank you!

loved the story, and am so glad you're back.

mmmmmmm

Made the mistake of reading this at work...hmm..now what is a girl to do?
Midnight S

Yay!

How nice to see you writing again!

Elegant and well-written, as always.

Glad you are back!

Please keep writing. You are the best author, hands-down!

Wonderful

Wonderful erotic story. Stirred something within me as I read. Left me wanting.....wanting more.

Oh yes yes yes

This is so wonderfully crafted, so completely arousing, and so utterly true. You write as if from inside my head. Along with everyone else, I'm thrilled to see something new from you.

Wow....

Awesome, awesome story. As a newly realized submissive I really appreciate how you delve into the emotional aspects of Becca's desires. So much more erotic than heading straight to whips and chains!

perfection

Love your erotic stories, they are really hot an beautifully demonstrates the difference between eroticism and simple smut. However, it bothers me when you use the word "breath" incorrectly. It should be "breathe" - which is the act of taking one breath after another. Thus it would be "Take one breath" as opposed to inhaling and and exhaling continuously = as in for instance"breathe into the pain".

The Trojan Tap Room--

I have to read your story again, cause I got so lonely and homesick (but I'd never lived in upstate NY before--I'd never lived in the northeast before) that all I could think about was the Trojan Tap Room. Which doesn't exist anymore.

I feel like crying and rending my clothing. I LOVED THE TROJAN TAP ROOM IN TROY, NY. IT'S THE FIRST PLACE I WENT TO AFTER GOING HOME AFTER HAVING MY BABY. My husband knew I just needed to get out and walk in the air and snow and everything--and I went to the Trojan Tap Room and had a Manhatten and a BLT.

Men have been good to me.

(Meaning, esp. my husband. I've wanted to be protected.)

I'm reading this story and feeling it--

it's great--

i just got so homesick for Troy, NY that I couldn't stand it. (And no normal person gets homesick for Troy, Ny.)

ALSO: I'm inhibited about what ah'm readin here--

which is ONE reason ah'm talkin about Troy, NY--

She loves it

Becca finds out she loves rough sex to satisfy her lust. Your writing does a great job of conveying this.