All Comments on 'Hollow'

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Corpse_riderCorpse_riderabout 12 years ago
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A great piece of short erotica. Eye catching title. Good build up, simple straightforward story and a very strong ending.

Recommended.

FunkyPeople99FunkyPeople99about 12 years ago
good story

nice pacing and build up looking forward to seeing more from you

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