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by SunsilkWater05/31/12

So curious for more!

I enjoy reading you writing and this story was no exception ;) but I believe that you could still add more into the story with an update; I'm really curious about what happened when oshen's brother watched him almost drown in the tank, was there a meaning behind that? I'm also curious about what will happen to Pearl and Oshen now that they have decided to be together. Will she go to live in his palace or he come to live with her? Either way I enjoyed reading this piece even though I'm left with some questions left wondering, lol.

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