A Sister's Lust for Brother

Listen,

I loved it, and it was hot. And in a way correct. But it was a bit on the unbelievable side. Maybe try for a little more realism next time, for other readers sake. As far as I'm concerned though, this was perfect.

Oh dear...

You lost me when he became a sculptured Greek god(?) and sported a 10" dick. I now this story is mythology but even so, ordinary grunts cannot identify with this. Well, I cannot! Please, write a story the average Joe CAN identify with?

Reality check

First off, the 10" greek god put me off... But then, 16 kids...yeah right...

REALITY CHECK TIME!!!

If your going to live in a fantasy world, least make it reasonably realistic.

Ignore them

How is the Greek god and 10" completely unbelievable just look at some porn stars. And the 16 kids isn't that hard ti believe if unlikely there is a freaking tv show about a family with over 12 kids

redneck dreaming

How long have you lived in West Virginia?

garbage as usual

way to many STUPID ERRORS wrong words ect. get a good editor and do a rewrite this sucks big time. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.

loserSW

ALL ANONYMOUS CONTRIBUTORS ARE LOSERS. MAKE YOUR COMMENTS WITH A NAME OR QUIT THE SITE AND YOUR COMMENTS. SEE I HAVE ENOUGH PRIDE TO DO SO AND CAN WRITE IN CAPS TOO ASSHOLE

don't correct spelling and grammar if you can't spell yourself

Anonymous....in your complaint, you said; "way to many STUPID ERRORS". You are right, this person had some issues. Concentrate on the story first and not on spelling and grammar. By the way, it's "way TOO many stupid errors." You spelled "too" incorrectly by using "to". Nice try, though. You had a good concept on this story hereiamto. Keep trying!

Potential Squandered

This could've been a great story until out of nowhere the brother comes into her room and has sex with his heavily pregnant sister, without knowing they've already had sex or any warning that he wanted to sleep with her at all. The 16 kids bit was also pretty out there. Overall a 3 star story but it could've been a lot more.

re: loserSW

Assholes who hate anonymous posters should stay the fuck off the internet. The net was largely built on the concept of being anonymous, ergo the reason for remailers and onion routing. If you don't like, YOU'RE the one who doesn't belong.

Way (TOO) many...

Sorry had to do that for anony-mouse. The lil' bitch is sounding more and more like someone's snot-nosed kid sister that can't even attract flies.

As for the story written the way it is; it's your story. Reel in the details and try to find some romance and you will be good-to-go. Only the author knows exactly how this story should be told.
RS

The story kind of fell apart in the last few paragraphs

I like that there was a happy ending, with him and his sister finally getting together, and that they made a family, but it was a bit of an overkill with them having 16 children.

The story was fairly believable up until that part, or a least it was a good fantasy.

Still it was a very erotic tale.

Thanks for the read.

THE GOD SAYS.......................

For man to replenish the earth...........But he never ment for one man to do it all !!

In the Bible

GOD said, "that man should replenish the earth".
I agree no man should do it all.

Good but not great

I enjoyed this story, actually. But at the end when he suddenly comes in and has sex with her... would have been better had she stopped him, told him it was his kid AND then they had sex. 16 kids was a push, and the totally accepting parents... kind of weird. But other than a few grammatical and spelling errors it was a good read.

The author is the creater, we're just the reader

I though the story was good, the author was living out loud. We are just the reader of his thoughs. It's not about what we think, but looking inside his mind. This story is about a sister's lust for her brother, later becoming a brother lust for his sister. That it nothing else matters.

YUM

i enjoy this authors stories i've read them all n shit talk abt hot i cum evry time yumi n fanx :-)

I.fingered my pussy until it squirt on this story made me very wet and horny thankyou. verynaughtykelly@hotmail.co.uk

I wish I could fuck my sister like that

Their were six of us,

Mother had had sextuplets one boy and five girls and a year later six more girls by different men. Mother had never married and we all live on a beef farm. Mother ran the tractors along with a few ranch hands. As we grew our breasts grew large like our mothers and by sixth grade we all were 32-38FFF's. On the other hand our brother grew in a different way he was almost seven foot to our five foot and was wonderfully endowed with over ten inches of hard meat. Mother like his meat as much as we did except she had put us on the pill and she was very much pregnant and having more daughters. As we finished highschool she took us off the pill and now our brother has twelve pregnant women to keep him satisified with others in the wings as they finish highschool.

best ive read.

I want my sister to feel that way about me....damn what if she does... :) Deff. going to wear more sweats around her. please reply to me on this.

Lotsa kids?

16 kids in 10 years? No wonder the earth is over populated! If you can't keep it in your pants, at least be sure she is on the pill.

Great story

This is exactly how I feel about my brother... Even if I worry slutty clothes and shiz, I don't know if he'll ever think the same. :(.

forget the nitpickers, this is a fine story

It's a very common thing when a big brother gets a hard on over his kid sister. Her adorable little coochie stirs his balls, and he'd really love to fuck the shit out of her. It's rarer when, as in this excellent story, that a sister gets real wet between her legs over her brother. But here it's because the boy is in really great shape, muscular all over, and sporting a fine fat prick as well. When the brother sticks his big prick up his sister's cute little twat, there's loving sibling bonding. He finds his sister's sweet cunt is the perfect place to unload his brotherly balls and shoot all the creamy semen he's got stored in them. Blissful sis agrees one-hundred per cent.

ilove this

this is great did u ever tell him i love hot young girls they taste soooooo good and if i could i would do what u did with my siste she was and still so hot tom wish u was my sister

"A Sister's Lust for Brother:" - Unnamed and Unnamed - (brother and Sister)

NOTE to the writer/author: All characters should have a name for a couple reasons. 1) Naming the caracters makes the story so much more personal for the reader: and, 2) Naming the characters makes for easier identification of the characters, instead of he, she, him, her, they, we, them, their, our, etc.!

This is a very good brother and sister carnal, incestual, life-committment true love story--a family oriented devoted, dedicated incestual family with lots and lots of children, bred by the parents of a beautiful brother and sister "husband and wife" couple! My one question is why did they stop at sixteen children in just a ten year span. With the sister being near thirty years old at that time she would be still in her prime years still for another fifteen years or so, maybe another twenty children to love and nurture!!

"A Sister's Lust for Brother:" - Unnamed Sis and Unnamed Bro - (Sister and Brother)

This is my second reading of this story within the past couple months. The story thrills and excites me as much, or more, than the first read. I did mischaracterize their future plans for more children in my first reading. Sister says, "...We still plan to keep producing as many kids as we can..." near the very end of the story. My apologizes to the writer for my oversight, and I expressly and eagerly agree with the writer they should have as many children as their bodies and "Mother Nature" permits their currently youthful bodies will allow.

My accolades also goes to the writer for keeping the story as pure, true, unmuddied carnal incest between only the sister and her brother. Incest, even in fantasy and fiction, is not for stroke, pornographic, gutter sex!! It is for the most part pure and unadulterated romantic love of blood-related family members, who know the true value of non-compromising love without conditions for each other. This writer has the complete understanding of incest and blood-family affairs of love and devotion!! May he always keep his stories true to the values and honesty that incestual affairs in real life adhere to and honor!!

Good story but preposterous.

How proud the parents are when they find out the circumstances of the pregnancy. Horndog brother knocks up his slut sister at a gloryhole? What a pair. Then all those kids??? Talk about really liberal!!! I love to read about incest but this is just too much!

2x

Have to agree with bfree2run, typical lib fairytale!

Hmm...it was an ok read, could almost be good if I had prepared my mind to be in fantasy land from the start. ...but my brain just kept thinking ' really?! She let that dick touch *any* part of her body after knowing he obviously shoves it through a glory hole for anyone of any sex with any disease to do anything they want?! If I had gotten hard that would have killed it right there! ...then the ending, 16 kids?? Ugh!

Why such endless focus on the male descriptions?

All these submissions have gushing admiration for the male anatomy regardless of the narrator's supposed gender, yet all the female characters get a simple quick one-line description of general build and sometimes a stab at cup size.

It's nearly certain the writer hasn't a passing familiarity with a real woman's anatomy so is a male who has great admiration for male physique. Whatever floats yer parade float I guess, but please do some basic research about women before posting stories from female points of view or about the female sex anatomy. These submissions read like a load of pure comic book silliness.

Hills Have Eyes

and this is how Hills Have Eyes started....nice read btw

Not a pretty sight

Obviously the author has never seen what that amount of births does to a woman's body. My great-grandma had 18 kids between the ages of 15-35. It was so not a pretty sight. Not many women would really want this done to them.

Otherwise it was a good read.

Geez I Feel For Her

Nice concept, but a bit of a tall ask on the woman's body. My wife and I have 2 children and it took her at least 2-2.5 months to get over the birth each time. Admittedly, they were both cesareans but still.

Ya ,right

Was a great 5 star story until you got carried away and killed it at the end. 18 kids .......really .. My 18 inche dick and I have voted 3 stars.

Different but arousing just the same. I think a chapter is due to explain the 18 kids and have a section on how they lived and of course continued with hard - hot sex. Thanks.

Bravo, 5 stars !!!😉

Thanks for the great story ! You really do have talent. I wish you would continue to write. This story not only had a great amount of sexual orientation,but it also was joyful . Job well done Sir!! It annoys me to no end when people pick it apart over every little thing. Just relax & enjoy. Cheers!!

TOO FUNNY

a 46 inch dick into a whore? scum of the earth story.....