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Nice conception and execution
Alas, this thought has been expressed in many ways before, which may devalue the composition a little. Do share more - you are on the right lines. With a pinch more of originality the verse could be both powerful and evocative. S.O.
THE LEADER ALWAYS
has their following. TK U MLJ LV NV
Stimulating
I see now why "Teloz" claims your works among his Favorites. And you earned it with simplicity, yet still deep with a clear significance and sincere meaning. Words DO stimulate the mind, and soul. Tony C
#2 SPIRIT IS WILLING FLESH IS WEAK
friction will cause the body to respond then the mind will rule, TK U MLJ LV NV
hello
I would have liked it better if you had not told us you were Bi, if you were not going to elaborate on the rest of the story of you being Bi. But since you have told us part of the story that you are Bi, then you must tell us the rest of the story of you being Bi. On one part you say you are Bi. Then on the other part you say you have one man. If you like us to vote for you, then please answer.
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