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So far so good
Interesting start.
Promising
That's a promising start. Please keep on writing.
In His Shoes
I'm in love with Mistress Danni already! Sounds like Mr. Harding is going to have a memorable year ahead of him. Please don't keep the readers waiting long for the next episode.
Luscious Start! When will there be more?
This has every hint of a great series. Please--don't let us wait too long. I don't see many thing this promising and this is for sure, one of em!
thanks
thank you for all your comments and I'm currently working on chapters 2 and 3 though please be warned there is very little in the way of erotic material just yet, still trying to set the scene :)
Proceed.
Proceed.
Good start!
What they said.
Help required
If anyone has enjoyed reading this and would like to help me with proof reading and editing the chapters to come then please get in touch, I think I'm going to need it :)
Thank you
From New England, USA
Please continue, the Pilgrims are anxiously awaiting more!!
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