The "Perfect" Wife?

HUH?

A very different kind of story. Something you have to read and think about. I would have liked more detail about Betsy and the father but still a decent read. Maybe a chapter two from Betsy's point of view?

PERFECTION AND PERFECT

and never the twain shall endure. TK U MLJ LV NV

How could you do a Romantic Revenge Story from a good consequence story

This story is an excellent consequence story and an epiloge makes this story be Hyper Romantic Revenge Story, because the meeting the new wife's daughter would be a revenge event. BTW 5 stars

Good Story

But you breezed through the meat of the story - discovering the cheating through divorcing the cheater - in a paragraph. It's like reading the beginning and the end with tghe middle missing.

bad

Bad, really bad.

Good, really, really good.

5 stars here as well. The husband lived well and the bitch got what she deserved.

lawyer?

Good story, except that it is hard for me believe that a lawyer would not have done a more thorough job of 'vetting' a young lady he met as an adult (not a HS or college acquaintance)! DWormcock is NOT going to like him hitching up with 'old stuff'!

Thanks

For sharing.

It was ok, but not great.

There were too many holes in the plot and a woman having children in her (very) late 30's and early 40's exposes them to a high possibilty of Down's Syndrome, not very erotic IMHO.

However, there was some good parts as well and I look forward to future stories.

Fuck Dwormcock

I gave it a 5* so you at least get a 3 out of it when Dwormcock, full-time fucktard and asshat, rates it.

not bad

you need a little more character development to let us know who everyone is. i gave it a 5 but you can work a little more on it. another page of information wold have been great. i love age difference stories and this has great promise. try rewriting it a few times and see if you can do better. excellent story line.

An excellent well writen story

A good storyline bringing a romance and consequences/revenge story together very nicely.

I also liked the happy ending.

Thanks for the good read

The Down syndrome can be tested by blood tests not only intrauterin test.

Now that's a love story.

Well done.

Second Comment

Imagine falling in love and marrying your mother-in-law after your wife cheats. Very different and quite preposterous. Still a good read.

It worked very well -

But it again had a rushed feel to parts - do well building your characters when you take the time to do it - we got nothing on Betsy or Dad except to assume they were the same kind of soulless, conscienceless people.

That is a little thin - she took to him for the meal ticket (you allude to) but gave up without a fight/ He had no "real proof" beyond the possible misappropriation of shared assets? Again thin - but the story as a whole was very good - the angle of taking on mom-in-law was real good they were close enough in age that it worked well.

As for birth defects - it is much easier to anticipate them these days and 40 + is the higher risk time not 30's even today.

Thanks for the offering.

Interesting twist

I enjoyed it. i would have liked to see the scene when he told Betsy what was going on.

ALL IN THE FAMILY

and keeping it in the family. TK U MLJ LV NV

Question - Why the fuck would he want to conceive defective children with this woman knowing that his ex is going to be the aunt of said children and knowing that Jill helped his wife lie to them just to keep him around so she could eventually get laid? Seriously - not buying that explanation about "destroying her best chance"; she was in lust with this guy, actually liked him and let her daughter, who she knew was going to self-destruct, lie to and deceive him, putting him at risk for AIDS from gangbanging like a stupid whore. Between that and the over the top description of a woman in her fifties having had children and the "tightest pussy" he's ever felt is kind of fucking dumb.

hmm....

The two children would be the ex-wifes half brother and half sister so she would not be their aunt.
39 years old is not nearly mid fifties.
Looks like the daughter takes after her father, which may be why her mother is also divorced.
Did you read this story or accidentally comment on the wrong one ?