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Doll Empire Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/01/12

Mind Control?

Where is the mind control? Two chapters in and no setup.

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by Anonymous03/01/12

Good Story

Good story. The mind control is implied. I assume it will become more explicit as the story advances.

I think by "terse" skin you probably mean TENSE, though that isn't really the right word.

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by C_frommn03/02/12

When!

Will he move on and either put the Ring on and go with the Flow and set-up his finances and gather More Women to care for him and his Future.

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by Taffbanjo201301/03/14

Terrific Story!

There only appear to be two chapters - I wish there were more!

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