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Gets better and better, roll on the next chapter. ( me thinks that the Rev Shaw might be involved here). No doubt us the readers wil find out in due course!!!!
MORE MORE MORE, please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter.
Next Chapter Please!!
Please not so long until the next installment. Fantastic story!!
At Last
You had me worried for a while. Lots of other writers say more to come and then stop. Since you have me hooked on your story, please, please don't take so long for chapter 12.
Please write the next chapter soon...
This is a great story and the pause between chapters is too long.
More Please!
Love this story and I agree with others that I hate waiting so long, but I like that you posted your blog website and that you update your coming along on the story so I know you haven't stopped writting it!
YOU DID IT AGAIN!!
Another quick chapter that answers the question left by the last and asks another!! You are a STINKER!! Hope you get your other story onto kindle soon so you can concentrate on this one!! I'm set with my kindle program to capture that story as well! You are GOOD!!!
plz update soon!!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Boo!!!!!
This was a downright tasty and intriguing bit. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Moms can be viciously controlling with their daughters at times. This was such a telling and funky dynamic, but oh so realistic.
Does anyone remember "Mommy Dearest"? Joan Crawford ( who I loved) was a bitch mama from hell!!!
"NO WIRE HANGERS!!!!"
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