Miz Sara Cooks Up a Surprise

CORNBREAD IS A STAPLE IN THE SOUTH

Miz Sara is a shining example of the ante-bellum belle. TK U MLJ LV NV

Totally insipid writing - pablum of the most banal kind.

Three paragraphs would have sufficed instead of wasting 3 pages. Initially it was a change to read a story about this Southern Belle in LW but now it is just trite. Miz Sara is just another potboiler with no difference in plots, characters, scenes.

Turned out not to be worth the effort of reading.

Just not worth reading as it turned out. Dull and boring.

Not great, but still very good

There's a temptation for readers to get spoiled with a good author's talent; to expect not only more, but better, efforts time after time. This is a solid FrancisMacomber story.

One nit-pick in editing: there's a big difference in definition between "discrete" and "discreet." Most Literotica authors write the former when they mean the latter.

Always

I always enjoy a Miz Sara story.

Thanks for sharing.

My oh My ! These Miz Sara Stories Makes Me Wonders About How Funny Life Is ( & if Marcey is closet , carpet munching lesbian on the down-lo ) ?

It figures. Of all these DO ASK /DO TELL senior baristress' sagas, the one ending I can remember from all Miz Sara divorce cases where the couple doesn't break up is because the husband's a voyeur & enjoys the wife's cheating. Sigh.

I still gave this ' submission ' five stars because the twist in other case turning out to be bigamy, caught me flatfooted. In addition F.M.'s Miz Sara stories are about the droll journey undertaken, not the destination arrived at.

I don't like that the men in this story get taken financially in each of the dual endings. Yet the skill Mr. Macomber has must be accorded it's due by my lights. I won't agree with the expected backlash of traditional male reader demographic that will no doubt be ensuing. "But I will understand it" ( t.y. Chris Rock ) .

F.M.'s submissions should have pander-free warning prelude at beginning so to save heartburn & outsized male ego inflammation. The lucid quality of this author's thought process stands out.

I warily thank him for this effort, while simultaneously wishing he'd give the male half of his character spectrum in these Miz Sara stories a bit more of a break.

Same ol same ol

Always great. I beleave Francis is trying to write pablum with great twists.

cockold kill it for me

anytime there is cockolding and its condone,that it for me.piece of shit of a man.

Love Miz Sara

Well written story. I always like to read one of Miz Sara's stories. This one was slightly disappointing because the wimp kept his cheating wife but, hey, like Miz Sara said some men like that kind of thing. I enjoy the reasoning and discovery Miz Sara and Marcy do. Keep up the good work.

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Love my Miz Sara stories.

Great stories

I love all the Miz Sara stories. This one certainly gave me a chuckle.

Hermit said it well.

This one was worth four and a half stars, but since they don't have that score I could only give it four.

You Write

Such fun stories. Thanks for sharing and please keep them coming.

Love the Miz Sara series.

It allows you to contrast different views on marriage, and have many outcomes. Thank You.

Wooah!

Amazing.... A Miz Sara story I didn't like. Rated a 2 instead of the usual 5.

boring

Could you make a more boring story, i bet you can't... fuck off out of loving wives!

Always well written and paced

I have to admit that there were no surprises in this story though I admit that I thought that perhaps Mrs. Patterson would also be a bigamist to give a certain symmetry to the story! Thank you, FM, for keeping us amused..

Missed twist

Yes, the Pattersons stay together and get honest and happy sooner than they might otherwise. However, what if both Morton wives decided they liked the alternate-week break they were getting, and decided to leave things alone?

Fun story...But

A bit like a Hallmark channel movie. Cute and enjoyable, but bordered on cliche. I liked your story, but didn't love it Francis. And they both chuckle at the irony then fade to credits.

Men hating shit

Keep 'em coming -

This was a good one too - just not quite as sharp as the others (to me) it was a but predictable - the bigamy was pretty plain (although at first I thought is was Miss Susan until she shared info) - and the sub in Patterson was NO surprise just a little disappointing - it was his chance to grow a pair -

But variety is the spice and all so he has the choice to be who he is -

As always for me - the scoring is writing quality first, my preferences in endings second so - nice work again keep it up.

more Miz Sarah Please

I have really enjoyed your Miz Sarah stories. Please write some more!

Loved it

I assume the is the closing chapter to this series. I loved it all. Thanks for sharing.

whens the next

why did you stop. Your stories are all good and I was really enjoying the Miz Sara series. It would be nice to read more in the series, the twist that you put in are excellent,

Fully agree

This series should be continued, very nice stories with surprising twists

Wonderful!

Truly enchanting and wonderful. If you, the author, could write a series of stories about these two I can assure you that it will be a bestseller!

Love the Miz Sara stories, but didn't much like this episode.

Not One Of My Favorites

I am NOT a fan of cuckoldry, and how BOTH sisters managed to snag cuckolds is beyond me!

Second time through...

Still love it, but not my favorite of the series. Five stars.

good but not great

Again you tend to tell too many stories in one. I would had made sense if they both were related, but they weren't, You could have told just one story and include more relevant information about them, not just the facts.
I personaly hate pathetic wimps so I hated one of the storylines. I don't like women like that to win.

The other story was really predictable, I knew he was bigamous from the moment his wife (the first one) told about her tale.

So good. Well written, but not great. One lame storyline and another predictable one.

i could see 1 way

Mr. Paterson signed the papers and had wife sign as well, because he had already taken a second mortgage and equity loan on house and hid the money. So now the cheating wife is also on the hook to pay back 50 percent of money while HE leaves town never to be seen again...

Polygraph

As a retired examiner, I appreciated your presentation. I believe you can't beat the instrument, but you can beat the examiner. C. H. Cook