In the Darkness

wow

One of the best I' ve read on here, can't wait for the next chapter

write more!

I always wanted to read a girls rape fantasy and boy was this HOT!!! Write more? I was so stiff while reading this it hurt!

From the author

Hey everyone! Thanks for reading and rating my story!! This was my very first submission, but I do plan on continuing the story as I already have many ideas! I plan to give characters names, as well as fully characterize who they are and their personalities. It's going to start to get interesting, only one of the fella's has had a go so far lmao!! Keep an eye out for chapter 2 in about a week or so!!

If you'd like to post feedback on what you might like to see in future chapters, please do so. If I get some good ideas I may do branching storylines/multiple story routes!

Sorry, I'm posting here as I do not yet know how to set up author comments at the end of my stories -.-

It was an awesome story continue to write further.....

give us another chapter please

I gave it 4 stars ...

... for a great begining. Keep up the good work.

It's a great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Love it!

Good title

Good title and no problem with straight forward plot/set up. More characterisation is needed though, and the dialogue and sound effects detracted somewhat. A good start.

Great story very well written.

This is a well written story and I look forward to reading a lot more in the near future

Great Story

This is one of my favorites, I've read it countless times. Very well written, I get off several times each read :-)

HOTT!

This was fantastic! My pussy is so hot and wet right now I'll have to finger myself for a while just thinking about that cock in her pussy! Keep writing.

disgusting

you think rape is hot? you think it's sexy? this is coming from a rape victim, and i'm telling you, having a knife held to ur throat? having a sweaty disgusting stranger pinning you down and violating u? having your innocence taken? being traumatized? being told it was your fault? this is disgusting.

For the rape victim

I can't imagine the trauma you must have been through and I won't pretend to...but going onto an erotic literature site, clicking the nonconsent section and looking for stories to post comments on to spread your hate isn't the right way to go about it . Purely fiction and fantasy and you know that...

To the commenter "Rape Victim"

I'm confused - if you are a rape victim why have you chosen to read a NonCon/Reluc story? Stories on this site are clearly labelled.

She was trolling

Troll

don't stooooooop don't stooooooooooooooooop

don't stoooooooooooooooop don't stooooooooooooooooooooooop don't stooooooooop don't stoooooooooooooooop don't stooooop don't stooop don't stoop don't stoop don't stop don't stop don't stop must be pre 80 generation before feminism

Argh!!

You have to continue this story!!!