I've been a big fan of your work since I first read Jillian's Naked Mile. Your stories are big turn ons, and I appreciate them. Thanks for writing them.
I wasn't sure about this story the first half. I generally tend to prefer stories where the submissive is educated and trained to endure, sometimes against will. This whore already knows the ropes which takes some of the fun away. However, the dominant in this story really seems like he will keep her in line, below him, despite her fantasies and previous experience. Very enticing!
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Anonymous05/23/12
100 shades of amazing!
Can't believe that the 50 shades crap got published when you are FAR superior!
This is one of my many favorite stories that you have written...and I ADORE each one..I hope you never run out of ideas because you have my heart racing with each publication..Thank You
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Anonymous12/17/12
omg so hot!
Do you have Natalie's address?
Love the writing style, so perfectly easy to read and soooo hot.
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Anonymous07/20/14
Loved it *5
wow
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Anonymous08/15/15
Great lustful story
Looking forward to new additions to this storyline.
I agree with Soma. It is so much hotter if the sub is a volunteer. It means she actively wants it, and is so much hotter than if she has to be blackmailed. There are women out there who are looking to be subs, and they turn me on like crazy.
English
Inspiring.
This story stirred up memories if BDSM in my own past. It reminded me of that giddy excitement. Thanks so much.
nice
Nice story so far. Looking forward to reading more.
I think you have a winner here!!!!!!
If Chapter two is hotter than Chapter one....oh boy !!!!!!!
Thanks Don
Wow!
Loving the series so far - hope it continues to grow!
WOW
I wish I could have given this story an 10!! Looking forward to reading the other chapters
I'm a Fan
I've been a big fan of your work since I first read Jillian's Naked Mile. Your stories are big turn ons, and I appreciate them. Thanks for writing them.
Oo
I wasn't sure about this story the first half. I generally tend to prefer stories where the submissive is educated and trained to endure, sometimes against will. This whore already knows the ropes which takes some of the fun away. However, the dominant in this story really seems like he will keep her in line, below him, despite her fantasies and previous experience. Very enticing!
100 shades of amazing!
Can't believe that the 50 shades crap got published when you are FAR superior!
Love your writing style
This is one of my many favorite stories that you have written...and I ADORE each one..I hope you never run out of ideas because you have my heart racing with each publication..Thank You
omg so hot!
Do you have Natalie's address?
Love the writing style, so perfectly easy to read and soooo hot.
Loved it *5
wow
Great lustful story
Looking forward to new additions to this storyline.
sir,yes SIR!
Excellent story. Very deep into the mind of a sub. Great exploration. Can't wait to read more.
Very nice
I like the stories of voluntary submission. Not everything has to be a crazy blackmail story.
Voluntary is hot
I agree with Soma. It is so much hotter if the sub is a volunteer. It means she actively wants it, and is so much hotter than if she has to be blackmailed. There are women out there who are looking to be subs, and they turn me on like crazy.
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