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GReat story!
Just the right amount of detail without getting boring. It actually could happen and is believable. Just sorry it never happened to me.
Great story.
Best I've read in along time. Not boring or dull. Looking for ward to more in the future.
Very enjoyable story
Jerry in Washington state - I usually read stories from writers I have already previously read, but few of them are still writing stories. This is a nice, believable fantasy where the good guy does get well rewarded. Thanks for the well written story.
Did I get envious of this guy?
He has all the breaks! Thanks for an entertaining story.
Fast paced, excellent buildup, character spot on developed thoroughly...
imh,
edited and Very enjoyable. I loved it! Great writing.
Thanks for sharing on Lit.
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Good Read.
A fun and entertaining story. Thanks for a good read.
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Please write somemore to this story awesome story
THERE IS OBVIOUSLY ROOM
for much more to be added to this very wonderful start. Don't stop know.
papagriz
Never commented before... But
I became a fan from you incest stories, and now this one... You're great.
Nice one
Funny how a lot of money can make you attractive to the opposite sex.
:-)
Well spent money , I might add.
Interesting comments section
NO rabid BTB readers have seen this one yet????
How about the cuck haters????
Well fine then - only more circumspect people with better attitudes - cool.
It was a fun read - they caught him and came up with a fun way to say thank you to a man they had both liked and respected for a long time - nice of them and maybe even too much gratitude - but damn what a week - and he has a future too lol.
good story
it is a good story, but a bit of a fairy tale. Life should be so simple.
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