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Nice.
It was a nice little story. I liked it.
GREAT STORY!
I thought it was great. Happened to me once (double booked room) but I didn't get as lucky as Jerry...only a free room. Keep up the great writing!
Lovely
And very entertaining. Thank you.
MGM hits the spot!
As always! You know this guy did not get too badly damaged in exchange for
a valuable lesson! Still what does he know about Jerri?
good
It's good to have a story with a bit of humour in it. Do more please.
Cute.
Well worth the read.
Great story.
Loved it! A very good read.
A complaint
Too short a story for one that was so entertaining and enjoyable to read. Was getting that good feeling smirk on my face from reading a great story and the damn thing ended. GGGrrrr. Top marks.
Bruce
He knows enough. He hasn't asked her to marry him - just made a date to explore further. Now we can hope Triple M writes a second story about wading through a long range relationship that turns into a close range permanent relationship.
Yoour Usual Excellence
Nice little story. Begs for a sequel.
nice short story
I liked it but it needs a ending or a new begining..
lovely
this was a nice little stiry i enjoyed it very much, I rather hope there is more coming .
First...
Sorry again for the typos, I ran back through this three times and still missed some.
Probably because I will be 70 soon and my 2.5 power glasses need to be stronger.
For those of you who wish some sort of ending? This story was about a beginning, who knows where it could end? In my mind, the part that leaves a smile on my own face is the "Perhaps?"
Stories of moments in life all end the same, one day with memories and then the final transition. I could write that, it would be easy.
"They lived happily ever after."
LoL
No sequel, none needed here, I am off to another idea.
Thanks,
MGM
Very Nice
Interesting read and funny. Well done!
Nice story
I disagree with some of the others. While a sequel could work, leaving it as is allows the imagination to take it to what ever destination one wishes.
I always look forward to your stories and click on them even if the title doesn't catch my eye. All I need to see is your name as author. Thanks for the enjoyment.
NICE
Nice writing--leave it the way it is!
THE NAME GAME
is best when paid by others. TK U MLJ LV NV
A nice, succinct
well tempoed story. No sequel is necessary, indeed I think it would spoil things.
liked it
you get a 5 - short and sweet.
As much as I want to see it work for them -
Leave it alone - it is great as it is -
A SNAFU TURNS INTO A NEW STORY
and romance for 2 travelers, TK U MLJ LV NV
A fuck up
Turns out to be good for both of them.....funny and very enjoyable....
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