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Paradise by the Dashboard Light

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by Pirate Tregare03/05/12

Great story!

I know it's not the best way to praise a story here, but first and foremost it's a pleasure to read one from this forum that could essentially go straight to a printer. Spelling, syntax, pacing, plot, grammar, are all virtually perfect. Might need some tightening up in editing, but that would be of a personal preference nature.
Took awhile before I realized her intent- I really did think she was trying to get him into a power nap!

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by Corpse_rider03/11/12

Dead Ringer for Love

Exellent read. Great characters, dialogue and plot.

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by ValensGirl03/28/12

Hee! I like Hannah, she's clever. :D

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