excellent story... enjoyed it heaps...
Zack needs to be there when Marybeth's explains the scenario... And I'd like to hear more about how this thesis came about.
This little quickie really hits the funny bone! Right up to the very twisty(tasty?) ending.
If maybe a little too textbook :-)) Liked it a lot when Barbie gave G-guy a chance to redeem himself with her pretended envy at her neighbor, and he so totally missed it. But Mary-Beth dropping the pretend voice, what was that about? I dont get it at all Hang in there, you are good :-) VvV
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Well Done!!!
excellent story... enjoyed it heaps...
More please
Zack needs to be there when Marybeth's explains the scenario... And I'd like to hear more about how this thesis came about.
Funny!
This little quickie really hits the funny bone! Right up to the very twisty(tasty?) ending.
Lovely story.
If maybe a little too textbook :-))
Liked it a lot when Barbie gave G-guy a chance to redeem himself with her pretended envy at her neighbor, and he so totally missed it.
But Mary-Beth dropping the pretend voice, what was that about? I dont get it at all
Hang in there, you are good :-)
VvV
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