All Comments on 'Terra Incognita'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A NEW DIMENSION

a new world unfolds. TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Another winner!

I like the deliberate quality of this poem, as evidenced by the rhyming of the second and fourth lines of each stanza. Yet the attention to "poesie" does not detract at all from the tender passion of the lovemaking! In fact, I think the form of the poem reflects the content -- studied, measured, foreplay leading to an overwhelming conclusion!

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