I had to reach a bit to buy into these people's behavior. Maybe a little more tease would help. Avyway, you have talent. I'll keep an eye out for your next story. PS you might want to consider the comment about proofreading. Try reading it aloud.
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Anonymous09/13/13
lick that Young Pussy......
I liked it, but I would have licked that young Pussy and maybe even had the wife licking her Pussy as I fucked the wife from behind.
fab love
is thare more to come hope so im hot and wet for more yours leann MAWH XXXX
Grammar.
In the future, please proof read your work and get an editor.
NOT BAD
I had to reach a bit to buy into these people's behavior. Maybe a little more tease would help. Avyway, you have talent. I'll keep an eye out for your next story. PS you might want to consider the comment about proofreading. Try reading it aloud.
lick that Young Pussy......
I liked it, but I would have licked that young Pussy and maybe even had the wife licking her Pussy as I fucked the wife from behind.
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