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The Warrior's Heart Ch. 02

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by catman7103/07/12

nice

but to short, and i think when push comes to shove, mattie is going to be a formidable . if not warrior,
general

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by Jack230303/13/12

Early on there are some grammatical errors that are distracting, but great job...on to the next chapter lol

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