brilliant first story DIY FUCKING. sure got more exciting as the story took hold . loved the writing do hope there a next part of this very erotic story .
This story would have been more credible if the main character had done similar things with his SIL in the past and this was just one more. However, for a first time together, the motivations did not seem sufficient for this to be credible.
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Anonymous03/08/12
Bravo!!
What a wonderful erotic story! Made me so hard that I had pre-cum on my cock when the story was finished by me. Wish I could do my sister-in-law who is so hot. She has an ass to die for just like the sister-in-law in the story. Having this story written by a female made my cock rise also. Thanks Angie.
Loved it. The one part that made me pause when he went from just bumping her ass to pulling it out, and fingering her, a little sudden in most stories like this. But that bump didn't last long and I quickly got wet again Angie. Thanks for the cum.
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Anonymous03/03/14
Good story. The only things that you need to fix are the places his balls are touching. If he is taking her from behind then his balls would not be touching her ass.
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Anonymous10/22/14
More!
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Anonymous01/19/16
My brother-in-law
This story turned me on so much because my BIL is sexy and he just offered to help with the grass and "anything else" since he knows my husband will be out of town for 2 weeks. ;-) I swear this couldn't make it more clear. Wow. He wants to fuck me too. Hahah
English
More Please
Really arousing first story - can't wait for the next one.
being taken in boles to a hard cum
brilliant first story DIY FUCKING. sure got more exciting as the story took hold . loved the writing do hope there a next part of this very erotic story .
Great start!
I loved the premise and the developement. Got me hard, then harder! I hope you decide to continue this story.
Enjoyable Read
It would be good to read more of this adventure ....
First time together?
This story would have been more credible if the main character had done similar things with his SIL in the past and this was just one more. However, for a first time together, the motivations did not seem sufficient for this to be credible.
Bravo!!
What a wonderful erotic story! Made me so hard that I had pre-cum on my cock when the story was finished by me. Wish I could do my sister-in-law who is so hot. She has an ass to die for just like the sister-in-law in the story. Having this story written by a female made my cock rise also. Thanks Angie.
Nothing hotter...
than a female author! I do however wish it were longer.
great story
i hope there comes a part 2 of this great story
is that paste?
while it did jump from teasing to fingering rather quickly, it was still hot.
Little of a jump but hot
Loved it. The one part that made me pause when he went from just bumping her ass to pulling it out, and fingering her, a little sudden in most stories like this. But that bump didn't last long and I quickly got wet again Angie. Thanks for the cum.
Good story. The only things that you need to fix are the places his balls are touching. If he is taking her from behind then his balls would not be touching her ass.
More!
My brother-in-law
This story turned me on so much because my BIL is sexy and he just offered to help with the grass and "anything else" since he knows my husband will be out of town for 2 weeks. ;-) I swear this couldn't make it more clear. Wow. He wants to fuck me too. Hahah
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