A Slave to the Servants Ch. 29

*****

one of the best stories on Lit!

Great Story!!!!

You have a true gift for writting. I hope that you publish books in the future.

Thank you....!

I completely agree with the comment regarding forgetting it is an erotic story. I am delighted I stumbled across ur story last week!! It has been hard to put my phone down as I just want to keep reading! Thank you again!!!

I LOVE YOU DW!

I am commenting to soley let you know that I adore you! You are SOOO talented! I was a harry potter kid! J.K. Rowling made me believe the wizard world was real! I'm sitting here daily checking in on pateria! Pateria is the wizard world of my young adult life!! Please keep writing and please please look to get published!! The world is not ready for you!!! I cried so bad this chapter! Beautiful! Please make Pateria a series too. I never want to stop reading it!

Okay, that was so much harder

than when Hannah and Kennedy left. I've got tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. I wonder if Jonathan and Aiden can convince the other boys to have a fit unless they see Mama. He's strong willed enough. Can the two of them convince the others and make it a majority vote?

I just want Ciara to be reunited with all her family. It will be obvious to Nu-Reeh that hannah and kennedy are involved if Jonathan and his brothers are taken. They may have a long road ahead of them.

Entranced by your story, as always. I can't wait for more!

Thankyou!

Yes, some words aren't quite right, and your Italic words are getting confusing because you miss some and do others that I didn't think would be English words, but I love this story. I love that others agree that sex is one of the best was to bond with another person; I admired how you took the discipline too far then resolved it; I adore that Ciara is sweet and kind but a strong woman and her strength shows in subtler ways then just getting herself into trouble, I feel proud that she can let her children live in the way of their fathers. It takes great willpower for a free person to submit and thrive. It's great you still do fantastic erotic scenes, they always tend to fade or get repetitive in longer stories. I look forward to the next installment, how many more chapters are you planning on? I always dislike when a good book ends, I tend to mourn the loss.
Congratulations on a wonderful novel.

Wow!!

I almost cried like a baby. I hope that the boys raise so much hell that thet have to take them back to Ciara/Rachel...this is really sad. But in actuality, Johnathon probably won't even miss his mother to where it would be a problem. I feel like he won't even remember her. Sad but true. Again wow, this was kind of a sad chapter...great but sad. Can't wait until 03/21/12

Loving this story.

I love this story it makes me laugh, cry, and curse. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Made me LOVE, LAUGH & CRY. .

wow!! Just wonderful! The parting made me cry a little. Hanna's and Kennedy's parting didn't had this effect on me. Maybe it was because of the fact that unlike the girls, he didn't knew that he will never see his mom again. And God! His last words that he wanted to swim in the night, they left a big lump in my throat.
I'm in love with this novel. Please keep posting. Waiting patiently. . .

love it as usual ...

by the way you are amazing. your imagination is soo good its crazy lol. well done!! I'm reallly looking forward to the next chapter .. can't wait so be quick and please make the chapters longer (at least 4 pages) : )

The Tears!!!

That ending had me crying. So good I can't wait for the next chapter.

One of the best chapters ever!

I normally H A T E backstory and plot chapters but Oh My Holy Hell the one time Ciara holds it together and now they're selling the boys..........so damn soon!??!??!??!?? I wanted to get to know his their brothers! I picture Aiden like Damien and Johnathen like Even but, * sniff sniff * I wasn't ready. Grrrrrrr I am soooooooo relieved that all Johnathan's brothers all wond up together. I was so worried that one would be free and Nu-Reeh would be able to track the others to the freemen or something. I really have been on pins and needles. I hope Ciara holds it together better this time; and I am so excited for Ciara to pick this planet and her family over Earth. Now does Ciara have a part in that new symbol or is Nu-Reeh concidered the female breeder? Couldn't they tell Christoph's mother was human? With Ciara and Evan both from other planets it's ironic he's so Patarian. (sp?) Obviously the men love Ciara; but will they still breed with Patarian women after they are free, will they still "belong" to one of their own woman, or will they become faithful to Ciara? What will it mean for the other slaves? A lot on the moral swing of things. She isn't faithful to one man; but neither can she just pick someone to have sex with. Ciara doesn't seem jelious during breedings; but how will Rachel handle freedom and sexuality. Will that effect the family structure since she can't perminatly bond with them. Ut Ohhh- it hurts when I think again! I'm also SUPER relieved their having more normal family debates and I love that the girls are involved. I would have been SO dissapointed if Kenedy and Hannah havn't been involved. Thank you.

DW_ this is just way to stressful! I keep promising myself I'm only going to write a couple of lines on how AMAZING this story is in every single way and how it deserves a Noble Peace Price if only for what it brings to my house, and then SHUTUP but I can't help myself!

Cried like a baby!

Great story! I have kids and each time it breaks my heart!

Amazing Story!!!

I'm totally hooked on your story, I read through the whole thing in a couple of days, work be damned. I agree, best piece on lit. Thank you!!! Can't wait for more!

New twist I didn't expect...

You've done it again. You have added something that takes it to a new level and makes the story even richer. This really is a good story.

amazing

another wonderful, but sad chapter. i cried when the boys left. more please. cant wait to see what is going to happen next, you always surprise me.

Gosh can't wait ant longer...

Cant get enough... Where's the next one... I've read all the chapters and need the next hit already

Sobbing!

I'm so sad Ciara has had to give up her children. It didn't seem so bad with the girls because it was really their choice, but for Jonathon to be SOLD and taken from her!! Absolutely heart wrenching!
You are truly an amazing author!

Wow

Beautiful chapter cant wait for the next one

I keep forgetting to do this

But now I will surely do it--

Big thanks to DW and Steve for this wonderful piece of literature.

3 chapters left to read in my marathon--!

So Sad!!!!

I cried everytime Ciara got separated from her children but with Jonathan I cried the most since his memory of Ciara won't stay with him once he gets with his new life and unlike the girls he won't live a free life. I have to say your take on Ciara and her children are just wonderful when I am reading what Ciara is going through I feel like I am experiencing it for myself hope you keep more coming...

Angry :-)

My family is absolutely angry with you right now!!!!
I have been immersed in this series for two days. I'm not cooking dinner on time, no laundry has been done and the dish washer is working over time since I've been on a reading vacation.

My poor bleary eyes can't continue this but I can't put the story down. . . Threw should be a warning posted for a story this all consuming!!!

Carmelangel...I completely agree!!

A warning must be posted, the distraction between reality and this fiction is strong!! My child has eaten cold cuts and soup for two days, lol. My heart is broken once again, eye are red, and my mind is consumed in a story I have already read once already. I wont check on my other authors nor other stories that are not complete, but are being updated. These stories were the best...so I thought...this story is the ONLY one I finished and started all over again, with the same damn reactions as the first time. So fucking sad....really my behavior is. But I am in readers heaven and loving every bit of it!

Going Blind

I hate my computer screen right now; it's killing my eyes, but I still can't stop reading. This is my second read through the whole story, though my first read was a chapter at a time and long wait in between. Seriously the best thing I've ever read. Full of emotion, heartbreaking moments, incredible passion, and fascinating settings. You have a gift, and you and your editor do an amazing job. I will admit my favorite chapters are the first ten, and I'm coming up on the chapters I remembered disliking the first time around, but then I remember life is messy, fiction isn't all pretty, and I still love these characters enough to see them to the end. I hope you continue to enthrall us with your imaginative worlds when this story is done.

oh my goodness

I have been reading this series since i accidentaly found this this website for three days ihave been up til past 1am with work and two kids (1 and 4) tonight it looks like the same while not a professional critic i do have a history degree(not that it means much now a days) and your story has engaged me in a way I have not felt in years kudos to you and when r u plamning a literary version of this

Heartbreaking!

I'm with all of you... I am so addicted to this story. I haven't commented on each chapter, because I am so pressed to start the next chapter. So well written and unique.

My heart breaks for Rachel and her men. I hope they will somehow be allowed to be with their children. As horrible as the separation is, I hope she has one more child. Is Kein the only one that doesn't have a child that we are aware of, out of the brothers? I wonder if Jonathan and Aiden bonded with any of the children Damien's and his brothers sired?

DoctorWolf, you are truly talented. Thank you so much for sharing your erotic, intriguing, captivating story. On to the next chapter!

Every Cloud Has a Silver Lining.

My current job is full time caregiver for my wife in the late stages of Alzheimer's. We have brought hospice into the house now (God's angels I am thinking :) If I keep her clean and fed she demands nothing else (and the silver lining is . . .) and I can read as much as I want as long as I might those needs :)

Yes it is hard, and yes I wash a lot of dirty items and run the dishwasher often, but in those minutes when she does not need me, I get to read. Dr.W. is a great therapist and she helps me keep things in perspective by reminding me there are lot's of other things I can focus on besides the immenent death. I am not trying to be morbid, and I am not depressed. We are both 70, we have six children and seven grandchildren. Her life (and mine) have been full but it is time for her to move on. She is doing that more each day and spends less of her time with me. When she goes away, I come read and the sadness and worry are set aside.

Bless you Dr. W.

Lynn

This made me cry. I love your story. Better than the books I've been reading. Thank you for writing.

Beautifully written...

tenderly, lovingly and touching every heartstring I have -- and some I didn't know about. You write these particular scenes so expertly, with all the emotion and grace imaginable. I'll assume you're writing from experience -- and I thank you kind lady for sharing. Take care...

light blue

I have loved your story, you couldn't reel out the chapters fast enough & it got frustrating. So left off for a long while & its been worth the wait....doing nicely hur Wolf....lol!
This was sad but it had many endearing, & happy moments.

:'-(

SOB! This is so beautifully done! I can't even imagine how Evan feels right now. Actually all of them, then again, they aren't like Ciara and they don't quiet understand her pain. But they hopefully will all feel the loss, even though (hopefully) we will see Jonathan again. DWolf you never cease to amaze me.

to Lynn

You are very strong and courageous! I pray that your wifes' new journey is peaceful and full of love and that you two reunite one day. Good luck on your new journey in life and I hope it brings you love and happiness. I best thing about death is understanding the unknown and having faith in the things you can't always see. You understand that, and I commend you for that.
God Bless you and yours.
Kristen

This is the second time I am reading your story, and yet again this chapter made me cry!!! I absolutely love the mother you wrote for us. Such a touching story.

A

Echoes

Hello again,
This chapter was so touching, the moons with Evan, and the simple way Jonathan accepted his brother should feed from Ciara. And I just loved the way they told Aiden his Mammy was dead - I was blubbing unashamedly again!
I can only echo what everyone else has said about the quality of the writing, and the way you never fail to touch and amuse us.
Thank you again.
Ariana xx

I hate you!

I really, really hate you! lol The last few chapters have been a roller coaster ride and you end it with Jonathan leaving?! How could you?! lol

As always, great story.

:'(

I think this is the saddest chapter so far. Hannah and Kennedy left too but they were older. Jonathan is just a baby! Well written though. Love the story :)

2nd time

Reading this again and I still cried!

Amazing!

I have other things to do. Really. Too bad they're not getting done. I absolutely have to rip myself away to get done absolutely anything else at all.

I have been reading for decades, much of it Sci-fi. This ranks up there with RAH and McCaffrey (sp?) as some of the best I have read.

Well-freakin'-done!

VisualPerv

teary eyed... :(

Reading this chapter again after a long time still made me teary eyed... still this series has me hooked!

I have been crying throughout this entire chapter!

Wow

i am a big man but i had tears in my eyes because of the last scene. damnd good story. the best story i ever saw here. 5 stars.

I have read this story time and time again. Even knowing what is happening I can't help but tear up when reading this chapter.

still great

My 4th reading and this never gets old. Knowing how it ends doesn't ease the emotion of this chapter. So good.

Well shit

You made me cry again. I love this story. You have a way of writing that emo t ions conjecture strong. I would definitely pay to buy this.

Still makes me cry.

I followed this story when you were writing it, and have read it many times since. This scene always makes me cry. The first time my oldest son was getting ready to go off to college so I thought it was the emotions of that change in my life. Now I know you did an exceptional job with Ciara's and Halil's emotions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing this story with us and keeping it available here. If you ever decide to take it down, please consider self publishing so us repeat readers can buy and keep our copy.